Oh oh oh oh oh! She mad, unusual...something seems to be provoking her beyond the memory she had. We gonna finally see some Kagome/Mer Prince time??? Can't wait! I think I know who the prince is, but I'll wait until the next chapter to maybe find out!
Kessa
It seems like this was/is a suppressed memory. Did it really happen?
Wow, the background history is very dark. It'll be interesting to see what it will all lead to.
Seeing the slayers now arriving, it's going to start getting serious?
Nice, onto the next!
Okay, pretty sure that The Lord is not Sesshomaru. I'll wait just a few more chapters just to make sure though.
Now who are these two mysterious figures?
The legend of how the merfolk came to exist is fascinating. Did you happen to make it up or have a reference to go off of? It's a brilliant piece of work, makes it seem believable :)
The reactions in this chapter are awesome. I love Shippo's explanation to Rin of what Miroku smells like, haha.
Love, love love love loved this!! The way it's told from Kagome's side, to the merman's is fantastic!
Ahh, I have to real words for this. Just love for chapter, I can't read the next.
The information that Sango gives is fascinating! And her story about being kidnapped by the mermaid is neat too.
Is Kagome perhaps feeling disappointment or jealousy to her dream where the merman claims Rin as his?
Well this was interesting to read. The tone of it seems dark, and one could think The Lord to be Sesshomaru, but I'm still not convinced. Something tells me it's another as the western Daiyoukai.
Kaede's reaction is mildly surprising, thank goodness Matsu handled her so well.
Shippo's lessons with his foxfire was rather brilliant. It's nice to see the interaction between kit and father :)
Omg I loved this chapter, and I did laugh throughout it. The mermans initial panicking, thinking she was going to leave, then confusion of what she was going to do, then daziness to her stripping was awesome.
And his reaction to Kagome cleaning herself-hilarious. And the mention of bad fish, lol.
It was cute when we wrapped himself around her and kissed her.
I'm still guessing at who the merman is...nothing solid yet.
I wonder if Kagome's dreams will actually become reality in the future?
And that silly woman is crazy to bathe and then purify herself in such conditions. Hopefully she won't take ill from it.
Ohh I love Shippo in this, and Matsu (well done with his character!) is awesome too. Rin is as always adorable too :). I love when Miroku asks Rin who she will marry and her immediate response, haha. Shippo sure got himself good there. I went back and read that a couple more times just to giggle over it.
I wonder if the Western Daiyoukai is Sesshomaru? It sounds like it might be but I'm not fully convinced...
Nice, calling for backup is wise.
Oh wow, I think this is a favourite chapter. It's so...intense! I love how you've wrote the descriptions of the interaction between the merman and Kagome as well as the shore and ocean.
If this is how the rest of the story will be, I'm shivering with delight and can't wait to read more.
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