Such a beautiful story, I hope et doesn't end this way?? Lol even so I enjoyed lazing around reading all day so thank you!

I just finished re-reading this story. I enjoy it each time.

I have enjoyed reading this

Excellent story. But it ended with naru us dead????  I truly enjoyed it and it recemble the reality of women being abuse at jobs.  I know that it can be difficult to advance at certain jobs because of your gender.

I liked this story! It was very well written and fairly original. I wish it was a bit longer but I can live with the brevity ????

I like the story; well-written, flowed easily and with just a few grammatical mistakes and typos. But if I had to quibble, I thought the story ended a bit too abruptly. Naraku went down a bit too easily, but action is not easy to write so I'm not too fussed. It would have been nice to get more exploration of the aftermath, plus a hint on whether the new world order Sesshomaru would bear fruit.

The story was entertaining and I thank you for sharing your creativity.

hope to read more ok

Pretty good story. Are you going to do a sequel with Sess' idea being put into play?

This story was awesome, amazing, and I enjoyed it!

First reveiw woo. Great story, going to fave you, would say more, but I am at work. Continue soon plz :)