I think this was my favourite chapter, just for the last bit when Father Time scolded Cupid for his way of talking :). You did an amazing job of writing cupids speech habit, he had an interesting way of getting Kagome to see his way. Can't wait to see the next update!
Kessa
Cupid was quite interesting. He's my favorite spirit so far.
Well cupid's personality was totaly unexpected. But I guess if you think about it, "Hippies" as they're called are all about love and peace, so I can see where cupid would be like that. As for Kagome and Sesshomaru, I hope they get back together. I wonder what Sesshomaru will say now that he's bumped into Kagome again?
cmsully (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Feb 2013
Dude, Cupid's totally groovy... *snicker* Sorry, couldn't help myself...
Do you think Sessh would eat the Easter Bunny if they met?
Oh My Goddess!!! I LOVE Hippie Cupid! What's next, a little leprechaun? lol Seriously creative and fun story. Maybe a toothfairy can yank a fang from Sessh. Whatever you come up with will be sure to be fun and amazing.
Caera (Chapter 5) - Thu 14 Feb 2013
He sounded like he is high on something...he seems cute but silly and needs some spanking from old man time....
Very nice. I'm looking forward to the rest of this tale. Good luck with the rest of the prompts (or the prompts you can manage to use)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Very very interesting. I like how your taking classic bed time tales and adding them to your story. I would never have thought of adding an obvious catholic/Christian/whatnot story and combining something that people would normally put the Japanese equivalent. Pretty excited for future chapters.
Love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Sesshomaru is a fool sometimes!
-Forgotten!
I quite enjoy the various spirits that show up. I wonder how long it takes Sesshomaru to realize that if all these spirits of sorts keep showing up about his relationship with Kagome, then he probably shouldn't alienate her. Very nice so far.
Talk about trouble in paradise! I hope they can patch things up. Cool story by the way.
So at one level Sesshomaru beleives what Kagome says, but on a more concious level he's so covinced of his superiority that he disregard what he's been told or makes excuses to refute it. Looking forward to more.
This looks like it will be an interesting tale. Hopefully Sesshomaru can get off his high horse once and a while and realize that the villagers are important to Kagome.
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