this is such an engaging story, and so original and fun. i love getting to see early sess life, and how it relates to his family and upbringing. also, some super deep points in there. i think a lot about why sess is the way his is, and how his family and life events plays into his beliefs and such. and how things in the original content can play into that. great job!
Mecca (Chapter 33) - Wed 22 Jul 2020
I love that you've come back! I do hope your find your way again with this story as I am so curious to know where it was headed - if you have a destination in mind :) love your writing, glad you've picked it back up again!
Delighted to see this again. I am looking forward to how it all ties together. So sorry about losing the data!
Mel (Chapter 33) - Tue 21 Jul 2020
can't wait to read more! so excited to you you've updated!
I am so enamored with this story! Gah!
Kanda (Chapter 32) - Wed 03 May 2017
sooooooooooo.... you 'bout to come and update this magnificent story anytime soon!? i read and read until i came to be what seemed like the last chapter. i had hoped it wouldn't so. alas, it was! please, PLEASE come back and update. this was a fantastic twist to have kagome as an imaginary friend. in the beginnings of the story i was even thinking "it would be cool if she was like some spirit before her actual birth." and then i saw that it WAS. or something like it anyway. please! come back and update! i will love you ferever and share s'mores with you if you do!!
This story is awesome. It's sweet and sad at the same time. I love it! I hope you come back to it when you're ready.
Kitten (Chapter 32) - Thu 29 May 2014
oh great chapter, cant wait for the next one.
Nice, keep it coming.
Kae (Chapter 32) - Wed 28 May 2014
Ok, 1) SO glad to see another chapter! Yay! 2)..you write KakaSaku? Can I ask where it is so I can read all THAT too? :)
OMG, you had me there for a second. I was about to die of heartache if that had been the end, I liked the way you got Sesshoumaru to give up his infatuation with Miko. It seemed completely likely and believable, but if Kagome had been there when he woke up I don't think he would have had the complete meltdown that he did. Gosh I really can't wait till the next chapter comes out. This story is AWESOME
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
Eve (Chapter 31) - Mon 31 Mar 2014
Oh please hurry with the next chapter!
love this story!
This just kreps getting better and better!!! I am definitely looking forward to more updates!!! :-)
Ps: thanx for the mini heart attack you game me with your "the end" joke, it was horribly funny lol
Ulam (Chapter 31) - Sun 30 Mar 2014
Sorry I've never reviewed your story before, but this is absolutely amazing. It caught my interest immediately from the first sentence and I just could not stop, even for the sake of school projects that are due really soon. Beautifully written. Keep up the amazing work!
ps. i had a heart attack when i read the 'THE END', I was ready to flip tables.
Cool, keep it coming.
Should I cry now?
*sniff*
Update soon!
Nicole (Chapter 31) - Sun 30 Mar 2014
Damn. I can imagine that that was the end.
That was a very intense chapter. You did a great job leading up to and interpreting that final scene between Sesshomaru and his father.
This is awesome!
I didn't see this coming at all. Especially her waking up in her 'future' version of the past. I wonder whether these are memories or her appearing with Sesshomaru once she falls asleep.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Nicole (Chapter 30) - Wed 19 Mar 2014
Hmm, that's an interesting set of turns. I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue to tie the two characters together... and just what is "real" and what is not.
Eve (Chapter 30) - Tue 18 Mar 2014
Yes another chapter!
i can hardly wait for the next one!
please update soon!
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