i liked this story. you did really good with the characters growing from the pain each went through.

once again you left the story open at the end. maybe you'll come back and add to it? i hope so. i

thinks there is so much you can include in this story. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

i liked your story :)

AMAZING is all i can say. this was short, but sweet. if you do a sequel i will be looking for it. i think it deserves one. i would like to see how sesshomaru deals with a pregnant kagome and if he will let inuyasha help while she is with child. please do one even if its another short story. c'ya'

I love your story. It was such a joy to read. I like that Kagome and Sesshomaru had such a complimentary relationship through out th story.

I love your story. It was such a joy to read. I like that Kagome and Sesshomaru had such a complimentary relationship through out th story.

I love your story. It was such a joy to read. I like that Kagome and Sesshomaru had such a complimentary relationship through out th story.

I loved it. I could not top reading till i finished every chapter.

you are such a talented writer, I love each and every one of your stories. I look forward to more :)

Could you PLEASE write an epilog? PLEASE!!!!

Nicely done! Good story everyone s mostly happy but her future friends lol.

This story was awesome and amazing, and I enjoyed it!

Good story I enjoyed it thoroughly but confuse a finalizing chapter. To wrap it all up

I love this story, it's bloody brilliant. I patiently await a new chapter and hope that your health and life is good.

This was fantastic!  I love Sessh and Kags!

I like the way you 'grew" Inuyasha here.  He is always the bad guy or dies.  I think he is more like what you made him out to be.  Someone who made big mistakes but learns to grow from them. 

Awesome work!  Too bad this is a Sessh/Kags site or else I'd lke to see what happens to Inuyasha and Shiori.  Good choice!  Can you imagine them as part of the West in some way, shape or form?

Anyway, congrats and thanks!

This was a wonderful story...Sesshomaru had this more vulnerable, emotional side, but I guess it was only right that Kagome was the only one other than the ones who watched him grow.

I loved the entire story. It was everything I love in a story adventure, growth, and love.

Awesome story!

Very good story. I enjoyed reading it. :)

It's Ashes Ashes, not Achoo Achoo. Because all the belongings of the dead had to be burned. Or at least, the version I've always heard was ashes ashes. 

Soooo the fact that it says this story is complete is a joke right? RIGHT? (hysterical sobs follow) I feel there is so much more to this story. It cant end this way. Please continue! This is such a well written story. I love how Sessho and Kag's relationship progressed. The flow of the story was great. I was hooked after chapter 1. Again PLEASE CONTINUE.