Yay!! she had the baby! Too bad sesshomaru is being a hard headed asshole.....he'll change right? Update soon :)
I'm crossing my fingers and toes that you give this story a happy ending. I absolutely hate sad endings. They not only leave me feeling sad but also angry. Also, I wish that when she went to speak with Sesshoumaru, that she had taken the pup with her. I was disappointed that she left it behind in the hut. I would love to have known if he would have shown any reaction with his son actually in front of him where he could see and smell it. I wish you would reveal some of his thoughts, too, and not just Kagome's.
Well ... at least Sesshomaru isn't going to kill her and/or the baby ... but it's so sad that he's already acting like a dead-beat-dad! Will Kagome be able to go through the well again or has the baby permanently stranded her in the feudal era with Sesshomaru? Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!
Lauren (Chapter 12) - Sat 30 May 2009
Im happy that you updated and sad that sesshoumaru's such a jerk! Keep writing, I wanna know what happens next lol
I hope you know that you're very good at leaving your readers wanting more, I can't wait to see how you portray Sesshoumaru's reaction to the news...it should be very interesting.
hahaha..."we should walk, I have no desire to touch you." Great line, totally sesshoumaru-esque.
OMG, you just put sesshoumaru and kagome into a void and severed Miroku's hand in one fell swoop...and I have to say that that is probably the most creative way ever to get sess and kag together. Why not let them get sucked up into Miroku's hand, yea, brilliant, why didn't I think of that. I know the title 'the void' is pretty obvious but still I was totally shocked that it was Miroku's hand. I guess I was assuming it would be something to do with Kanna. Anyway, I have devoted many hours to reading fics and yours truly was the most original idea I ever came across, excellent job! I give you an A+++, not that you care, but I give it to you anyway. :D
Lauren (Chapter 11) - Wed 13 May 2009
OMG she's pregnant and she's not going to tell him!!!!! I am so glad you finally updated, I cant wait to see what happens next! update soon :)
Ikaru (Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Apr 2009
Yay...they made it out ok!!! i was kinda wondering about the whole Noh mask shard....hmmm well i really like ur expaination of it :D....well now that they are out of the void what is going to happen???? i wonder....well guess i'll have to wait and see....*huggles* later Hair-chan!!!
A very interesting and original approach to the story. I like where this is going so far, and if or when (and how) Kagome and Sesshomaru end up getting back together again. Perhaps Kaggy is now carrying Sesshy's Puppys? Mmm, this story is very interesting.
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Wed 25 Feb 2009
that's brilliant, though i really hope you would twist it a little to have sessh chasing after kag after escaping the void... well, you know what i mean... but make sessh suffer more kay...
Hmmm... I don't think you can rely this much on someone and then resume the same relationship as before... Kagome seems to realise it, but I wonder if Sesshomaru is going to be able to see things as they are...
This is all very good lass. I look forward to your next chapter.
Dewa mata
I really like you fic and can't wait to see what happens next. I was really worried there for a second that Miroku was dead. O_o`! Glade to see he survived. ^.^
MontiK (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
Im so happy there's another chapter up ^.^ another wonderful one too! I hope poor Kags doesn't get all hooked and Sessh really doesn't care :( it's sorta sad.. Can't wait for more though!
MontiK
Ikaru (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
I got a little confuzed a time or two as to who was talking, but other than that I really like the chapter!!! i can't wait to see what you come up with next!! Much luv Hair-chan!!
LC Rose (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
Oh god, Hairann. Another splendid chapter. I always look forward to seeing what Kagome has to say in the beginning and forming the picture of the flashback in my mind. I'm glad Miroku wasn't killed, too.
MontiK (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 Feb 2009
I love this, it's totally new and really unique. The format you have with the introspection before the chapter builds alot of anticipation! You make me wish I could speed read! Pls write more soon!
Love your writing, MontiK
Lauren (Chapter 7) - Mon 12 Jan 2009
I love this story please update soon!
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