i jsut love this story! i wonder if Touga's wifey is really as awesome as she seems, not only that what's going one with Kagura's momma seems too good to be true!
I have only one word to say about this chappie...AWESOME! I want more!
Really great and funny story so far
Keep it coming! Although, as a constructive criticism comment: some of the grammer is kind of hard to follow. Do you reread the chapters before posting?
But still lovin the story!
I want more. About time Touga put Inu in his place. His mother did spoil him. He should find someone else. Sheez Louise.
TKE (Chapter 3) - Wed 29 Aug 2012
I'm loving each chapter..lol. Can't wait for the next!
lmao, i bet he uses the puppy eyes on her even in the middle of a mess and she forgives him! Murder! love it! more please!
Emma (Chapter 2) - Wed 29 Aug 2012
love <3
Ennui (Chapter 2) - Wed 29 Aug 2012
*chuckle....LOLROF*
OMG, that was priceless. I can't wait for chapter 3. I love how Touga is the master manipulator and not Sesshomaru. I actually find it different that Sesshomaru went along with all of it! Intriguing indeed.
I always enjoy how you portray Inuyasha. He's always the loudmouth putz.
Good stuff... good stuff.
Keep up the good work and update soon!
I did a lil happy wiggle when I saw that this was up. Themiddle confused me a bit. You introduced her in as wearing sesshoumarus shirt and an exes pants and then half way thru you went to her and sesshoumaru getting aspirin and her Being pant less again. That's the only weird spot I saw. Had to retread it a couple times.
TKE (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Aug 2012
Awesome, I'm glad there is more!!!! Touga should get his ass kicked!!
i like this so much! i'm in giggles :3 ^_^ HAZZAH FOR SMUTTY LOVELY PLUNNIES!
SQUEEEE!!! BACHELORETTE PARTY!! MORE!
Lol. I love the ending.........its fabulous.
Love how you ended it. Not shocked, surprised, or embarassed... just 'oh.'
TKE (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Aug 2012
LMAO!! She is one lucky girl!!
lmao omfg thats just cute :3 but how can papa have 2 mates? x= you should make a chapter 2, where mate of papa coems in and is all >:l @ kagome and papa, and sess is all.. she's mine!
My, my, my! The joys of having sake in the house.
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