I'm reading the fight hoping Kagome got some bad ass in her despite how this all started. I kept reading even after u removed her from being a general but this, in not sure I can take. Why isn't she kicking butt I thought purity powers would be the first thing the army used or Sesshomoru sword for an army of the dead! Sigh this is weird. We barely get any background on the army it feels rushed. I sometimes can't tell when it's Kagome speaking or Sesshomoru. It's still a good story I just feel that it's lacking
that was a great stroy....i luv the wedding it sound so beathful....keep up the good work...i look forward to ur stroys....
wow i cant belive kagome let herself get trap like that....oh boy i just hope sesshy finds her before anything could happen to her...
The story was and I enjoyed it.
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