*falls out of my chair*
THAT'S WHERE YOU STOP IT?!?!?! AGH! *cries* I cannot believe you would torture us like that... *sniff*
~Sandreline
More, keep it coming.
Haven (Chapter 16) - Wed 04 Jun 2014
Yes, yes and more YES!!!! I approve of this. More please!!!
Andrea (Chapter 16) - Wed 04 Jun 2014
Eeeee!! Love.
Akita (Chapter 16) - Wed 04 Jun 2014
Yay!!! Loving it! More please!
ah! A welcoming suprise. Sesshomaru acting so cute!
Akita (Chapter 15) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Awh, you do love me(ok readers in general)! I am so glad you've posted so much. I love this story and can't wait for more!
Kae (Chapter 15) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Still loving this! What a great story you're telling!
Andrea (Chapter 15) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Oh, Kagome. Please don't drown yourself lol And I wonder if Sessh liked what he saw in the quick moment?!
Keep it coming.
Poor Kagome!
Sesshomaru is killing her with her perfection lol....I do love the way you portray Sesshomaru though. While he is protecting her and trying to help her (getting her a better room to rent, ensuring she eats, letting her do the choreography, etc).
I am really enjoying your story!
Kae (Chapter 14) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
EEE!! I'm so happy to see this moving, seems like you really caught your muse! I love the characters and the development. Your jumps in time, while a little jarring at times, help to move the story along well and, honestly, I like them. It helps show that time is moving along and doesn't get us bogged down in details. :)
All five chapters are great, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Haven (Chapter 13) - Mon 02 Jun 2014
I like where this story is going. Sess is still a supreme d-bag but I suppose he's perfectly in character. BTW, love love love the multiple updates. Hope it continues.
Thanks!
Susi8 (Chapter 13) - Mon 02 Jun 2014
| I've loved reading your story since you first uploaded the 1st chapter! I like how you tell the story and how Kagome and Sesshomaru's interactions have been progressing little by little. I can't wait to read about their competition and everything else. Thank you for all the latest updates and I'm sorry for this super late review by the way. ;)
Andrea (Chapter 13) - Mon 02 Jun 2014
I feel absoltuely spoiled from all the updates! I liked Sesshomaru reacting to the kiss :3
aawwww, villain Inuyasha! Love the story. Can't wait to read more
Andrea (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Jun 2014
Oo what a jerk! I kinda wanted Seashomauru to see :O keep it coming!!
Kae (Chapter 11) - Sun 01 Jun 2014
FACINATING. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really enjoying this!
I'm really liking this! please update soon!!!
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