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Tessitura (Chapter 9) - Mon 16 Jul 2012

Alpha female 1 pup 0 *snicker* one should bow to their betters. LOL!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 9) - Mon 16 Jul 2012

lol  loved the purity slap! I am wondering what the boys were whispering about. Great chapter.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 9) - Mon 16 Jul 2012

o.o hahahahahahahaha SMACK! more please!


Sammy-O (Chapter 8) - Sun 15 Jul 2012

Wow. This is my first time on this website and was excited when I first got to it. I really do love this fanfiction and look forward to reading more of your chapters.


Tessitura (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Jul 2012

A clueless yet proud maru of course doesn't ask for a favor from pack.  he demands it.  eh, men.  now lets see how auntie kagome pops this boy, eh pup up side the head.  *shakes head*  wonder if she'll use her powers to keep him in line.  I don't see her taking his crap at all.  nope a rolled up papper for the pupp with shippo snickering in the background.


WhyAlmonds (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Jul 2012
This is a fantastic story! I'm only sorry I didn't stop to take the time to review every chapter as I went along--this was so good, the turning of pages outweighed anything else. :) Thank you so much for sharing! I look forward to your next installment.

insomniac_amy (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Jul 2012

It was so funny when she called him out for having everything planned. Looks like Kagome is in for a long hard battle with Takeshi. I can't wait for the next chapter!


KT (Chapter 8) - Sat 14 Jul 2012

Muahahahahaha "evil cackles." Someone is going to learn that life is hard, and not all glitter and sparkles! 


GreyEcho (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Jul 2012

And now I'm caught up. Just started reading your fic and couldn't help but click the next button.

 

I really like your fic. The rebeling son is interesting and his life was a little messed. Does sesshoumaru know about inuyasha? and the whole fight scene was really good. and.. yeah really like this fic did I mention that. can't wait to see what happens from here. Kagome the counceler? lol can't wait. ^__^


Ruby (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

I love your story, just a little mistake I noticed in chapter 5 Takeshi was 10, but in chapter 7 he's 15.


insomniac_amy (Chapter 7) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

I am sooooo loving where you are going with this!!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 7) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

trainging your child by miko zappage? x= nice!


KT (Chapter 7) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

This was a very well written piece! I couldn't stop reading it until the very end. Well done! :) I can't wait to find out what happens next!


None (Chapter 6) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

More!!!! Cool. Chapter! Loved when kagome called the.Common bandits!!


mangageek (Chapter 6) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

I really love this story, I wonder what kind of puinshment the boys are gonna get, I bet it invoves Kagome


Nilee1 (Chapter 6) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

A well written and engaging story


insomniac_amy (Chapter 6) - Fri 13 Jul 2012

I wonder if the boys will cause more trouble. I can't wait for the next update! Great job.


insomniac_amy (Chapter 5) - Thu 12 Jul 2012

Uh-oh it looks like little Lord Takeshi has been in trouble before. Great updates. I can't wait to see what happens next.


None (Chapter 5) - Thu 12 Jul 2012

Update!!! Awesome story !!!


stoictimer (Chapter 5) - Thu 12 Jul 2012

interesting... looking forward to see where you take this story


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