oh, how cute! I think a frazzled Sesshomaru is always adorable.  
hehe, I was beginning to wonder where you disappeared to! Can't wait to see what happens next! 
      
The premise, good. The setting, I can deal. There's just something not working for me, it doesn't flow. It starts and then a word, or the way you happen to phrase something jars my attention away from the story. I think you just need a beta, other then that... I'll see if I keep with it. No promises. 
      
dianne (Chapter 12) -  Mon 30 Jul 2012 
Cute! I really like where youre going with this story. I can't wait to see what his thoughts are on Kagome! 
      
2 cute 
      
Smittee (Chapter 1) -  Wed 11 Jul 2012 
Sad, but sweet. Sorry, for taking so long to see this! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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