I kinda have mixed feelings with this chap.
The lemon was great, don't get me wrong, but it was very unrealistic. I mean, it was kagome's first time... She, enjoying it, would be very unlikely. Especially with Sesshoumaru going all instinct on her.
You say your not sure you’ll be able to take it to 100 chapters? I believe you can without dragging it out. In the next chapter your probably going to have them defeat Menoumaru or something along those lines. After that the possibilitlies are endless. Do they both sustain more injuries that require healing? Do Sesshoumaru & Kagome lose their unborn babe or do the gods intervene & save the child? What happens while Inuyasha is running the western lands in his brothers stead? What happens to the 2 former concubines fighting against the Sesshomarus lady mother & Taku? And these are just a few ideas running thru my head after reading your latest chapter . Please continue forward & dont look back, you’ve got this!
Loveyaa (Chapter 81) - Mon 30 Jul 2018
2 is better than 1! Lets see them kick Menoumaru's butt. I can't wait to see what happens next whether it lasts to 100 chapters or not.
im so glad to see an update! i hope their pup is okay!!! i cant wait to see that moth bastard eat dust! he needs to take a dirt nap for all eternity!!! gah!
Ana (Chapter 46) - Tue 24 Jul 2018
This chap made me really hate Touga... His mate deserved better...
Ana (Chapter 42) - Mon 23 Jul 2018
So, I'm gonna guess that was Shippo?... The "I will get our lineage back where it belongs" it's a good give away :D
Great history so far!
Ana (Chapter 27) - Sat 21 Jul 2018
I love the fact that you try to use caracteres from Inuyasha's universe. It's really cool :)
Ana (Chapter 23) - Sat 21 Jul 2018
This smut was something else... I'm almost sad that she wont be with him...
Ana (Chapter 17) - Sat 21 Jul 2018
I kind of feel bad for Sara. I mean... it wasn't very fair was it? ...
Can't wait to keep on reading :D
Ana (Chapter 8) - Thu 19 Jul 2018
I decided to re-read this fic from the beginning and I just had to comment on this chap.
I was really trying hard to remember who Sara was and once I remembered I was really happy to see her here. She had such a hard time in the anime.
Thank you for not giving up on this story. It really is amazing.
I'll just keep reading now. :)
Leave it to kagome to be barely able to walk with severe abdominal pain and miscarriage potential to still want to fight. Kinda gangsta lol
Hope the kid is ok :(
KisuragiSama (Chapter 81) - Wed 18 Jul 2018
I LOVE IT!!!!! I WAS WAITING FFFOORREEEVVERRRRR!!
PLEASE PPLLEEEAASSSEEE WRIT MORE!!!!!!
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