I'm actually disappointed this was a one shot! It has such potential.
This was rather fun. I love the idea you came up with, with the coming of the halo around the moon power within the priestess will peak calling males to mate - that was the basic idea, right?
Anyway, I see the gifting of clothing as sort of a precursor to Sesshomaru taking her as mate, kind of like courting and courting gifts, even though Kagome thinks it's in payment for caring for Rin.
I sense you don't like Inuyasha very much. Just in the two one-shots he's either led her on and not mated her, or he's out whoring around thinking he'll get away with it. No matter. Inu tends to get the shaft a lot within this community. Though, he does still have quite a large following.
Sorry, now I'm rambling and off topic.
Good stuff.
Great story, please update soon.
amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Apr 2012
Wonderful story, love the humor!
this makes me giggle :3 i loved it!
| | | |