hmm, i'm getting more and more curious.

I'm not sure where the story is at the moment, this is what my mind interpreted however, hopefully I'm correct...first chapter Sesshomaru is intarogated Naraku about resent murders... but he says, “He puts his hands around her throat,” which means the killer isn't him but he some how has a connection to them.  The next two chapters I'm thinking that Kagome (and Sango) is a nurse in a mental health fasility and Onigumo is her patient who is be in a constant heavily sedaited patient [*inner thoughts of the crazy annolizer* 'arn't mentaly ill patients that need heavly suddated, tendend to the scary strong "nice men in white coats"?] Then I started thinking that maybe Naraku and Onigumo where connectes some how and Onigumo was the killer and Kagome was the next victume.  But I was all liek that don't make sense how could Onigumo do so in his state, and how would Naraku know?  Then My theories got all readical and I was thinking Maybe Naraku was Onigumo's twin and he was doing this weird psycic link where he knew who he was going to kill and how...or something like that...I even thought that Naraku was Onigumo just he had split personality disorder....But I still coundn't figure out how they could kill if they are detained...and if they wheren't killing anyone then why would Sesshomaru be investigating him?...

sigh sorry for the rambling it happens when I can quite grasp whats going on, my mind goes a mile a minute trying to go down every possible thing.  Keep up the good work I think I would be best if I just shut up and follow your story. ^-^' but it so much easier to say than to do.

-Nyuka 

Yikes this one's sooooo cool in so freaked-out way!!! *.* you're building suspense :P

Little lost, however i'm liking you going into the crazy Naraku's mind to build up the mood.
I'm already a little scared about what onigumo(naraku) is capable of here. Very interesting!

LOl this one left me a bit confused ;P Hope everything clears up soon XD

Update soon sounds interesting!!!! 

Sounds like an interesting theme, looking forward to seeing how it turns out.