I hope you update soon! I'm so intrigued.

the sroty is progressing wonderfully mina. cant wait for the next onea

Absolutly Lovely XD

Nyuka

YES!!!! CHECK MATE!!! take that ya jerk...lol ^-^

i love your story, and i'm so glad to hear it got nominated! good luck!

BE NICE TO SHIPPO!!!! >:D  hehehe

poor little guy stuck in crackerjack box with no toy O.o' lol

So Im thinking what the two are investigate at the moment is NOT what they are investigating later...this is just how they met Kagome ...yes I think I see now ^-^

I can already see Shippou giving Inuyasha a bad time lol

Love how quickly youre posting chapters, it means youre writing frequently. :) keep up the good work my friend!

^-^  this feel familar for reason I can't quight grasp ^-^

Nyuka

This is really good! I'm on the edge of my seat, wondering what's going to happen next!

Okay... the 'Eloquent' and Inuyasha's last statement had me rolling.
Fantastic chapter, I'm sorry I don't review on every one (sometimes, things are so chaotic I forget) but I will try to make it a point to do so.
I can't wait to see the interaction (or lack there of) between Sess and Kag, now that we have seen Inuyasha and Kikyo.

Maybe it's just me, but I love Inuyasha's character. I think he speaks closer to us than any other in the series. He's flawed, he's mixed, he's rash, he's trying to find his own way in the world... so glad to see him in this.

is this a flash back to when they first met Kagome....or is this happening now?

Nyuka

yay! i was hoping inuyasha was in this one!

Wow, then I read the summary and it tells me EXACTLY that *sigh* this is not my evening.
Still, GREAT story, I'm very curious where it is going to go.

Oh oh! I think I know what's going on! Okay, took me a little bit lol.
Kagome's story is in the past, Sesshoumaru's is happening now.
Awesome, love it, can't wait for more.

Of course Kagome would be a butterfly if Kikyo is a moth...^-^  it only disturbs be where its  coming from ^-^

Nyuka

Great update. I look forward to reading more in a few days.

Awwww thats cool cant wait to see him going all crazy and psycho-ish! ^____^

Where's Sesshy?? ?,? ;c

AAAAaaa... I feel like a hint of my wandering has been answered only to leave me a hair breath from understanding.....^-^ but I suppose it wouldn't be a detective myserty other wize no?  ^-^

Nyuka

oh my dear mina i do so love your syntax, references and not to mention nicknaming kikyo moth.