Reviews for Puzzle Pieces by MissKatt

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 95) - Sat 20 Apr 2013

Keep it coming.


Starfyre (Chapter 95) - Sat 20 Apr 2013

Glad to see an update on this!

Love the new chapter!

I'm wondering what Sesshoumaru and Kagome fought about and how it changed their relationship.

I look forward to more!

~Starfyre


Loveyaa (Chapter 94) - Sun 07 Apr 2013

Quite the story you got yourself here. I am glad I finally decided to read it. Its interesting that we are getting two stories at once, the one with her trying to get her memories back and the one of how they fell in love. It is quite the task getting her memores back one at a time for five years worth of memories. But it says a lot that Sesshoumaru is sticking with her through all this. Swoon. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Kagome will eventually get all her memories back :)


Starfyre (Chapter 93) - Wed 03 Apr 2013

What a sweet chapter!

I love finding out how they got together as Kagome regains her memories.

I hope you update again soon.

~Starfyre


My Eternal Anguish (Chapter 92) - Sat 23 Mar 2013

I'm not one for short chapters like this but I must say, very captivating story! I loved it so far. I do wish I didn't have to wait for the next addition only to read a paragraph but I'm just going to hope for a speedy update and let you know that this story, so far, is very beautifuly written, very touching and a great concept. It has a very nice rythm to it. I love how you incorporate these flashbacks into the story. The reader is "reliving" these memories along with Kagome. It's brilliant! Great job. Hope to read more soon. 

 

 


Leahchan13 (Chapter 90) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

Aww~ so cute! Keep up the good work and please update soon~!


see03 (Chapter 89) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

I'm a little put off by Sesshoumaru saying it is 'too early for Kagome to remember their first fight'. When someone has amnesia, and begins to remember, it can happen in different way. It can come in pieces, or it can come all at once; it can come in order, but more often than not, because they are only pieces, they come out of order. The patient may remember things from two weeks before first, and then suddenly have a vision from two years ago, and then two months ago. There's no order to recalling memories.

I think you could play that up a bit more, for the sake of realism, and throw a wrench into their relationship a bit more for Kagome to not remember in order. I understand you are doing it chronologically for the sake of telling the story, but it would be a new element for you if Kagome remembers something horrible Sesshoumaru does, and only later recalls what happened before.


Elizabeth (Chapter 90) - Wed 06 Mar 2013

AWW! So CUTE! This story is just so cute! I am really loving it. 


Starfyre (Chapter 88) - Tue 26 Feb 2013

lol

he's such a tease!

great chapter! Update again soon!

:D

~Starfyre


Starfyre (Chapter 87) - Sat 23 Feb 2013

Awe, he' seducing her! how sweet! lol!

that would be a memory no female would want to forget!

~Starfyre


Diane (Chapter 85) - Fri 22 Feb 2013

Like these. Have a slight correction though, you have titled at the start of the 1st sentence, it should be tilted.


Elizabeth (Chapter 86) - Thu 21 Feb 2013

I am loving where this is going! Thanks for the multiple update! Please keep them coming! :D


Lady Kirara (Chapter 83) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

What that's it?! More! I must know how this memory ends!


Lady Kirara (Chapter 82) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

Smooth Sesshoumaru... very smooth.


Lady Kirara (Chapter 81) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

Pfft. Inuyasha was nuttin!


Lady Kirara (Chapter 80) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

How very un-sesshoumaru like, and yet... so fitting ^_^

 


Lady Kirara (Chapter 79) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

I can just feel the tension mounting between those two.


Lady Kirara (Chapter 77) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

Hopefully Kagome has a positive reaction to this memory!


Lady Kirara (Chapter 76) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

Kagome you naughty girl!!


Lady Kirara (Chapter 75) - Mon 18 Feb 2013

So fluffy!


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