Oops, just realized it was a oneshot... Feeling stupid. I never read a oneshot before... So urs was awesome 
      
Jhenai (Chapter 1) -  Wed 21 Mar 2012 
Really nice. Do you plan on making this a short story or long? I was just wondering because I started a story only yesterday. I like your plot, and I love how you got right to the point instead of making me wait. Keep going. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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