I can't wait wait for this to continue I have the labour in this story is strong and smart and that. Also o can just so many things happening, like a friendship between her and her new servant, and her new life. I just can't wait
Nice chapters, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
There are Angels God put on this Earth Who care for us and guide us. You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us. They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears. They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile. They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child. God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own. She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown. She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her Mother
I am loving this story! Just found it and read through the 20 chapters posted so far. While your Author's Note indicates that there's a lot more plot to delve into before moving much of the Sess/Kag storyline, I am looking forward to seeing how everything develops. Please keep updating!
Leaora (Chapter 20) - Wed 04 May 2016
Please don't wait so long to post again, I really missed this story!!!!
Rhonda (Chapter 20) - Tue 03 May 2016
Thank You! Thank You for the update....
Loved the awkward hot springs "meeting" ;-)
Tisha (Chapter 19) - Mon 08 Feb 2016
Well penned.
Mona (Chapter 19) - Fri 22 Jan 2016
Please update again soon I am curios as to what will happen next. Where and when will inuyasha appear again. What hardsips will Kagome have to endure.
Oms so touching and sad. I literally cried reading this last chapter.
Rhonda (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Jan 2016
Thank You so very much for the update to your AWESOME story.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Haven (Chapter 18) - Fri 30 Oct 2015
Thank you so much for updating. Hoping for more because I am in love with this story!
xDori (Chapter 18) - Thu 29 Oct 2015
Welcome back! This is my first time reading this story and I like it a lot! Hopefully inspiration finds you again :)
Please, I'm begging you, from one writer to another, don't give up on this story, it is by far the best I've read on here.
Pamela (Chapter 18) - Tue 27 Oct 2015
I am enraptured by the lovely story you have written. It's like a painting, but with words. I am enjoying it immensely. I'm curious as to the wisdom Kaede will impart upon Kagome and if Sango and Kagome will talk men/demons as they are so oft to do while in the hot springs:) I'm glad that even though Kaede's death will be sad that she was able to help Kagome to see her son and enter the palace. I thought it hilarious that Rin and Shippou placed a wager on Kagome and Sesshoumaru getting together. I wonder who will win the bet Shippou or Rin? They of course are very stubborn, but it seems as if they are breaking through each other's defenses. The fact that Sess is curious is great and I loved their short but meaningful spar. I like the idea of Kagome being the lady of the House of Smoke and am so glad that her and Shippou mended the break in their family. Very curious as to who Kagome will choose....will it be Saito, Rin hmmmm. Or what type of adventures Rin may embark on if so allowed by Sesshoumaru. I also wonder if Shippou will ask for Rin's hand in marriage. It would be interesting to see what type of suitors Kagome will attract and if the Ice Prince will be jealous, mwahaha! The evil character you have penned reminds me of a female version of Naruku, but more sinister. It is a great brewing background story to the plot. I love the instance of new and familiar characters that you have put your own personal spin on. I love that Kagome is not weak or helpless and that she has truly come into her own. In an earlier chapter you mentioned the smell of decay on Kagome I truly hope that if she becomes Sess's mate (crosses fingers) that it will extend her life or that the Kami will grant her long life like that of a youkai. It would also be interesting to know how Saito truly felt after Kagome opened his chakras just maybe a dip into his mind would be interesting. I love this story! I will wait the next installment with bated breath.
I love you fanfic! I like how it tests my mind as I read and look forward to your next chapter! ^_^
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
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