I love this story. Write soon please!!!
Wonderful story, more please, I love your writing style! 
      
Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012 
Well the story is good but you have lots of technical problems, proper names are always capitalized, I, I'm & I've are capitalized & when you add ing to words ending in e you take the e out, like making. 
      
TKE (Chapter 1) -  Mon 16 Jan 2012 
awwww....so sweet!!!  and poor inuyasha....lmao! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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