generally i like your stories, but you need to proof read
Great oneshot. Well done :)
amy (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Jan 2012
Don't change a thing! Its wonderful just tg3 way it is!
TKE (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Jan 2012
that was a cute oneshot!
Sessygurl (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Jan 2012
I like it alot, especially when you didnt figure out that he was the boyfriend until later. Dont be afraid to describe what each of them are feeling or seeing but other than that excellent job!
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