I love the pace, good flow and even .. You keep pace so the reader follows well thx....
BTW love the writing, very Good
Love Love it ;)
Emiko (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Jun 2015
Nom nom nom . . . new chapters are delicious!
Zoku (Chapter 165) - Wed 10 Jun 2015
Yay! And, looking forward to the next update !
:)
Saiya (Chapter 165) - Wed 10 Jun 2015
Awww poor Shippo.
Elspeth (Chapter 165) - Tue 09 Jun 2015
YAY!!! So glad you're back. I got all giddy when I saw there was an update to this story. It is so far the only one that I reread.
Mona (Chapter 165) - Tue 09 Jun 2015
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next update. Hopefully Kenta will find Sesshoumaru and Kagome, which will lead to his and the others rescue.
Eva (Chapter 165) - Tue 09 Jun 2015
It's good to see you back and on your best game. Yea! Shippo. Hopefully Sesshoumaru will stop getting so much exercise jumping to conclusions now.
Dear Nomdeplume, its been a while since I visited this site. The first thing I did was read your story. And boy, did I have a lot to read. I really love how everything is falling into its right places like a jigsaw puzzle.
I eagerly await more chapters in the future.
katie (Chapter 164) - Thu 02 Apr 2015
Wow this is so good please keep going I like this one
Elspeth (Chapter 164) - Wed 25 Mar 2015
I must admit, I did not think this story would appeal to me. On a whim, I decided to throw caution to the wind. I'm pleasantly surprised and am looking forward to the future updates.
kyrinnie (Chapter 164) - Tue 24 Mar 2015
I love this story!
Pits really good and the development of their relationship is good!
Hope you update
Cute
Great, keep it coming.
Saiya (Chapter 164) - Wed 18 Mar 2015
Hell YA Shippo Rocks.
Marie (Chapter 164) - Tue 17 Mar 2015
We finally hear from shippo. Good he's safe for now. The progress with Jago me and sesshomaru has grown kinda stagnant. Maybe we are building to a climatic point I can't wait to find out what it is
Eve (Chapter 163) - Sun 15 Mar 2015
Loved being able to catch up on this story!
loved the chapter! Keep it coming!
REDWOLF (Chapter 163) - Wed 11 Mar 2015
WOW! This was a great chapter.
I can't wait for Kagome to use her Sessh mask. I can just imagine a poor sighted snake getting jumpy at the thought of fighting Sessh then knocking off her mask, or noticing her black hair and realizing it isn't Sessh and getting all cocky then wham! Holy power purifying that dude into dust. Ahhh So excited. But blah ignore me. I love your writing and I honestly cannot wait to see how you implement the Sessh mask. Ooh so good!
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