Soooo good. I love how Kagome is sticking up for herself, instead of just taking Sesshomaru's bullshit. She is correct learn to control yourself. Lol
I have found this story most intriguing as well as funny too. Kagome and I nuYasha's child is quite an extraordinary little fellow and he isn't afraid to it. He seems to have that part of his father in him. I enjoyed watching the girls fight for themselves and I think they were doing a fine job but it was noticably needed for Sesshoumaru to step in.
I half expected Kagome to fight him to get him to allow her and her son pack rights, but he couldn't not take care of what technically was his responsibly by blood relation whenther his brother was hanyou or not. It just wasn't done. All this time she thought he had just abandoned her and Katsuruo and Rin felt the same way. Sesshoumaru never was good with words when it came to the heart/feelings. They all would have been properly cared for long ago if it weren't for the guard that was supposed to be reporting the family's wellness. But I have to say that if rumour had gotten back to me that my brother was dead I would have to check these rumours for myself. But this is just me. It wouldn't take him long to orb his way to Edo and leave unsuspectently if all was indeed well.
I loved how though Kagome felt she had no other recourse but to do as InuYasha told her when youkai kept coming to close within the village boundaries to find Sesshoumaru, she sout out Rin for help. I liked hoe Rin prepared them to stay on Sesshoumaru's good side and to be be very careful how and when to pick your battles with him. Rin certainly has grown up and with alot of Kagome's help too as they referred to Kagome's future a few times when talking.
The flow I felt started a bit quick at first but then it finally made sense and even out. I am wondering if when Inu and Kags married and I'm sure, mated that something of his being youkai and she having Spiritual power was tranferred to them both. Maybe not enough to save Inu but their son certainly has a reversed Hanyou experience on the night of the new moon.
I didn't expect Sesshoumaru to actually want to take Katuruo as his own child/pup but I think he must have knew the rest of those vows are not fully completed without taking Kagome as his mate. I can't wait to see how this unfurls and I've just added another story to my favs that I know I should have waited until I caught up on the others but this just caught my curiousity, and damn, I'm glad I'm not a cat. JEN
Here I am at 2 in the morning reading yet again, and addicted to yet another fanfiction CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE.
Marimay (Chapter 87) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
Omg!! This chapter was so funny and amusing!! I love the story and keep up the chapters!!
Rina (Chapter 87) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
LOL! Is Kagome finally moving on?
Update soon!
Rina (Chapter 86) - Sat 21 Dec 2013
Kagome needs to grow up. If the nickname means social standing in a world filled with youkai appreciate it.
Awesome story by the way:)
come on kagome, grow up.
one day you will get a more fiercom nickname than sesshoumaru
oh wait. executor miko > ice prick
Love how he defused their argument and called the Lord of the West a child's. :)
Denise (Chapter 85) - Thu 19 Dec 2013
lol, I liked this update. It was funny at th end. I think they will have problems in the beginning, but they will work out in the end. When they least expect it, everything will flow together. Great update. :)
Denise (Chapter 84) - Wed 18 Dec 2013
What a great update. Keep up the good work!!!
I like how the story is progressing :)
Ana (Chapter 84) - Wed 18 Dec 2013
Hi! First, I love your story. Second, I guess the island you refer in the story that is near Haiti is Tortuga, an island that belongs to Haiti. Just for the record, Haiti is not a Central American country, is a Caribbean country. The Central American countries are: Guatemala, HOnduras, El SAlvador, Belice, Nicaragua, Costa Rica and Panama. And you can also include their territorial properties such as Isla del Coco, that belongs to Costa Rica or the islands in the CAribbean side that belongs to NIcaragua.
My goal is not to mark your mistake, is just that I am costarrican, so I know that part of geography very well and I know Caribbean people don't like to be "encased" as mainland people.
Page 20 of 25
| | | | | | | | | |