I'm totally confused about why it's switching between 1st person and 3rd person. It's very hard to read. You should always pick one POV and stick with it; normally 3rd unless it's supposed to be a memoir, journal, ect.

To be honest the story was good, could have been a bit longer but it was nice. I'm not a fan of First Persion POV so that almost killed it for me. I actually stopped reading it and went to look for something else but... I couldn't find one that I wanted so I can back and finished it. 

Dianne!! You wrote this!!! :O 

I just realized you were the author, I read your story back before I started writing!! I LOVE this! I even recommend it to people!! And I've read taken too!! Oh my goodness!! I love your stories!

LOVELOVELOVELOVE! 

<3<3<3<3<3<3 

poor kagome traveling without him is gonna be hell. but good story

I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing a great story.

Let the courting commence! I wonder how he will go about it

Oooh I'm intrigued!

aw i truly enjoyed the ending! :D so cute! :D it was short, but it was very good! thanks for writing! :)

omg...i read from beginning to end and i love it!!!!  makes me wanna go cuddle with my beloved hubby!!!!!

Your welcome dianne, the ending was sweet and wonderful! Thank you for the story.

Love is a four letter word that describs how I feel!!!

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Love It!!!!

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Awesome!!! I love it!!! This is great!!!Reading on!!!

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I dont even think that Sesshomaru remembered to even get the dog-on-sword!!! He just picked Kaggome up and was off lmao!!

Good chapter!!!

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Whoever waid that it was not origional, they were wrong!!! I loke this story and I've never heard od something like this before!!! 

Reading on..

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Oh this is getting amazing!!! I just love the mischief in this story...

reading on >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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So cute, please update soon.

so i finally got caught up on your story! :) i think it's a good story and had no idea it was your first, but I do feel that it was rushed a bit in the last few chapters and maybe that's what you're feeling too! I think Sesshoumaru and Kagome could've spent some more time together to realize their real love before the spell broke. if that makes any sense? overall, it's a great story! :) thanks for writing! :D

This is delicouusly evil and I love it!!! I cant wait to see what happens next!!!

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