Once again you rock, but cannot help wondering what his reaction will be.
so sweet! ahhh, i love that they have reunited. a lot more to come, i'm sure, but its wonderful for the time being
I can't believe you stop it there, I want to know about what Sesshomaru's reaction to Kichirou being alive. Keep it coming.
taixi (Chapter 42) - Tue 26 Jun 2012
so...there is this rather large plot problem which has been bugging me the last few chapters. I understand you want to use this plot device of "the elders forced me to leave" to create tension between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. But it still has yet to be explained why Sesshoumaru couldn't tell Kagome the reason he was leaving. (I realize that would destroy the tension you're trying to create, but honestly that would have been so easy for Sesshoumaru to do...and even if he himself couldn't have told Kagome, it is also not very credible why everyone else decided to keep it from Kagome as well). It's really hard to find the tension credible when it seems so unrealistic that he would have actually failed to just say "hey, fyi, I gotta stay away during your pregnancy, nothing personal, I'm being forced." The problem here is really that he didn't let her know ahead of time, and it's so easily fixed...hopefully this can be tweaked a little to add to the credibility :)
see03 (Chapter 42) - Tue 26 Jun 2012
It's about bloody time, that's all I have to say!
Sesshoumaru can't be too mad - if anything he should just be happy and relieved that his pup is alive. After all, he ommited information from her first, by obeying the Elder's orders.
But this is an angsty fic, so of course they can't just be happy and move on with their lives -_-
Why are you making me like this fic so much? XD I usually dislike angst stories, but you've got me on the edge of my seat begging for more.
Kula (Chapter 41) - Sun 24 Jun 2012
I just stayed up all night reading this story, it's wonderful... I absolutely can't wait for you to update.
wc1334 (Chapter 41) - Sun 24 Jun 2012
waiting is killing me! can't wait to see what happens :)
Kort Von Dee (Chapter 41) - Sat 23 Jun 2012
Please please please please update. I swear this has to be one of the best ive read and honestly, ive read alot of sess/kagome fanfiction. This is phenomenal.
Twistedf8 (Chapter 41) - Mon 18 Jun 2012
I foundthis story on mediaminer, then went to fan fiction, and now here and I couldn't get enough of it! What can i say, Your story is amazing and I cant wait to read more
Just read this last chapter
and it was crazy
here is my suggestion
update soon maybe???
I'm glad the truth is finally out and that Kagome and the baby are both okay, please update soon. Like NOW!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok so this is good they now know that Sakura and Shamrai were lying and that the elder had EVERYTHING to do with it, thats good. And that Kagome had the baby and both came out of this fine thats even better. But now Sesshomaru needs to take his behind across the well into Kagome's time to speak with her because I feel like this may take a while before she decides to go back to his time. =( I hope it doesnt come to that but PLEASE UPDATE SOON...as in TOMORROW!!!! lolz
Now that was just mean, better torture would have been telling him and denying access. I feel bad for him though because he really does love them both.
Drianax (Chapter 41) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
OMG! You have to update soon! Like now! I love this story, and can't wait for Sakura to get what's coming to her (I hope that's the case. Well her and the shapeshifter)!
terryanna (Chapter 41) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
How could you do that to poor Sesshomaru!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG. I totally love your story. you know how to keep it suspenseful, you have no visible grammatical errors and the story flows continuously. Cant wait til you update again.
see03 (Chapter 41) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
Man, how quickly these kids give up. Of course, I know what's going on XD
I can understand where Kagome is coming from - she's just gone four months without Sesshoumaru, and without knowing why he was gone, but I'm surprised by how that chapter got left with Sesshoumaru's feelings. Well, not surprised, because -hello cliffie- but I guess appalled that it appears Sesshoumaru isn't going to try to reconcile with Kagome, but instead wallow in grief and self-loathing. You may not have him do this, of course, but he could send a message to Kagome through Inuyasha. Tell her the truth, that he was forced to leave by the elders and forbidden to tell her. Nothing will change if he waits for Kagome - he has to take that step first.
This is getting good. Hope they find Shamrai soon. About time she and the eldest Elder were found out. I hope Kagome lets Sesshomaru know about his heir soon. Want more!
tinabug (Chapter 41) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
Well kags can't be to pisses or resentful cause she followed the orders of the council to!
koneji (Chapter 41) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
The heartbreak I'm feeling for them is a delicious kind of pain~ The drama and angst that just keeps building is simply amazing! Loved the chapter Katt!
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