i read this again and i cryed! if you ever add more, maybe he can spend her second life both loving her and figureing out how to mke her life last aslong as her own!
* tears up* this is SUCH a beautiful love story! * soddens tishu, wetted by tears, with stuffy nose* I loved it, *grasps your arm like a frail old woman and wails*  you are so aaamaaaazing for writing it! 
well, great story....got a little carried away in this review-and if your wondering, no that was not sarcasm. 
-BirdHummingAlong 
      
papitas (Chapter 1) -  Thu 18 Aug 2011 
well written and really emotional. I liked how you displayed kagome and the metaphors you used. It was a sweet and beautiful story that I enjoyed reading. Really nice job! 
      
I loved this, wholeheartedly!!  I'm so sorry that it wasn't in time for the challenge, cuz I feel certain it would have given ladyb a run for her money!  Simply beautiful, a unique take on what may have occurred following the end of the series/manga... excellent insight into Sesshoumaru and his thought processes as well.  Can't wait to see more from you, m'dear!! 
:D 
~~Wiccan~~ 
      
That was just so lovely, moving and beautiful. 
      
How tragic and sad and lovely and TRUE. Kagome would go stir crazy. Also, great job on Sesshoumaru in pain, brilliant! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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