I like your story. I look forward to reading more.

I really like this story. It is light, humorous (loved the name of the market) and quite enjoyable. However, I did realize in Chapter 2 that the first paragraph switches from first person to third person which is slightly confusing. 

I do enjoy Kagome's thoughts though! Abs.... -drools- yum indeed!

Keep up the great work!

Also, you should include a Disclaimer somewhere in each chapter. (saying you do not own Inuyasha.)

~Smo