i loved this story! it gave me the chills it was amazing!

That was very well written :) I enjoyed this story and although I am sad it is over...well it is understandable. although it would make an awesome story :)

I loved it sweet and short with the perfect amount of romance. I really enjoyed the flow and development of this story it was really good! I enjoyed the theme of death and acceptance of it and the enbodiment of it as Sesshomaru. I tought it was really "aww" when he asked her to keep her. Keep on writing I really like your style!

haha i kinda skipped a bit but this story is truely interesting :) Keep up the good work and update soon~!

Gosh, this is sooo cool! *.* Can't wait to see next chapter!

Very well written. :) I like the angle you are taking with death. I also like the third baby lol different idea.

I loved this chapter! Nice and really fresh plot I haven't read something like that and I think this fic promises much. I can't wait for the next one!

hmm this has potential :) really interested to see where you take this story