Love this first chapter! Sets up the story well. I feel bad for Kagome, whether Sessh realizes it or not, he's taking advantage of a friend. I have a feeling it will come back to nip him in the butt!
So, I'm not sure how influential reviews are on such old stories, but I can't help but send my wishes along after reading this piece! I actually started reading this story knowing that it was incomplete after having just finished your other work, Striking a Deal with the Devil, and I was Jonesin' for more awesome works. When I began the story I knew I was going to kind grieve the loss of completion for these characters, which was a little heartbreaking. That said, I couldn't stop reading the damn thing! To begin - you're obviously a very gifted writer. Between the fluidity of the pacing, the seamless dialogue, complex plot, and well-written characters I found myself absolutely lost in the piece. You always know when a story is well-written when you ache with empathy, especially during those heart wrenching moments of betrayal, and feel the burn of wanting redemption for the pain of love lost. I know that it's been so, so many years since you last approached this story. If I could reflect on anything I think that there was a way that the story became a bit stuck in the tug-of-war between the two sides -- both hurt and a path to resolution not yet found, though the hints becoming clearer. That said, it felt like you were dancing on the verge of finding the path for them. I know it's such a long shot - and you're working on another piece (which I'm also reading!) - but I thought I would throw in my two cents and beg you to bring fresh eyes to a story that you obviously spent so many hours pouring your talent into. I loved your characters and would love to see them find resolution in this fantastical story arc you put together. Thanks for all your dedication!
Toni (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Aug 2018
just found and read this story sorry you decided not to continue too many things left unsettled you are a great writer really was looking for more chapters
AH! I was so sad when I hit the last chapter and realized you hadn't updated in a long time. I enjoy your writing and hope you return to your incomplete stories!
UPDATE i've read your stories in fanfiction archive will start reading here for more ^_^ im really hooked to your stories
Loveyaa (Chapter 22) - Sun 10 Nov 2013
Kagome is slowly, very slowly, being broken down on that matter. I wonde how long she will be able to hold out. With Sesshoumaru soon to work with her and I'm sure his father going to go berserk and get Sesshoumaru back, things should become even more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Great chapter, congratulations on the new job. Please update the next chapter soon, keep it coming.
Excellent my friend. Congrats on the new job! I loved the back in time part and when she attack Kagome. It sort of reminded me of Inu's blades of blood.
A little sexual tension in the air between them as well.
Im wondering how Daitaro will react to Sessho's plans, Im sure he will level the house.
Ankita (Chapter 22) - Tue 05 Nov 2013
finally a new chapter please please keep updating
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