omg i love it, i want the next chapter now lol

I am a new writer myself, and as such I do not have a lot of authority on the matter. The best thing for me was reading up on my subject. If you have a goddess read a great story/fanfic about a goddess. Try to re-read your chapter before you post it and afterwards for flow. Read it aloud to anyone who will listen and your dialougue should become as smooth as butter. I believe you have an excellent story and I am excited for the next chapter. :) I believe you are doing an excellent job.

i think it good i really hope that you continue keep up the great work and i hope to read more soon ^_^