Wow! Unsettling, very unsettling.
This short, tiny, little drabble has left me absolutly dying for more. Not only was the writing supurb but the ploy makes my mind run off in a million different directions and I can't wait to see where you take this. 
      
Rayne (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Jun 2011 
interesting and weird in a good way i think, very short though and i don't quite understand what it's about yet, but i'm interested in seeing the nest chapter! :) 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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