Loved it simply loved it.
Very well done i love it!
Cute! I love it :D
It is very well written and I liked it, somewhat, but it kind of made Sesshoumaru seem like a coward.
I didn't really enjoy this one, but I am pretty picky when it comes to poetry so it most likely has nothing to do with your writing. :) But you did a good job on getting the reader to see what was going on and feel a bit from Sesshoumaru's POV.
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