wow awesome :D i've been reading Letters,Love,War but i needed a change of pace from the downheartening story.. though very good :D so i read this it's good too :D i like your style of writing very much its very desciptive and tells just the right parts of a story :D i want to know what happens in all your stories and every time i start reading the next it takes over as the best story lol i've been staying up till 3-4am in the morning reading your stories for the last few days and waking up at 10
i just keep telling myself i'll stop at the end of this story then when its over i think i'll just see what this stories about lol but are this review i'm going to sleep it being 1am... and i have to get up at 8 ><
i find myself thinking in your style though full of words and desciptions of things... though unable to really write like that which is weird... pff anyway i usually write a little about how you could continue a story but i have no idea whats going to happen lol and my imagination only takes me as far as just beyond the well and maybe a castle beyond that :D if that makes sense... lack of sleep and wont not...
oh also i've noticed in your stories you've writen sense instead of since just thought you'd like to know :D great story update soon :D
I can't wait to read your next chapter. This is such an awesome cliffhanger. I mean I'm right there! On the edge of the seat... just waiting for you to update for the next chapter.
This is so interesting. Does this mean that Sesshoumaru has no clue what type of technologies that are in the time he has awakened in? How long ago was he put to sleep? I wonder what is at the bottom of the well... too many questions!
Please update and put me out of my query misery!
jojo661538 (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Jun 2011
so far its really good keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
D: TEASE! More! I really want to set inupapa's hair on fire! seriously, i don't like him already, trapping your own son? nope, don't like. Though part of me thinks that Kagome will end up with Stockholm syndrome for Sess and his cause. I dont think Sess hates humans, i think he hates everyone he thinks is below him and of little worth, i also cant see sess hiding who he is to make anyone feel better, or that he's not threatening. miko get to be miko so why cant demon be demon?
MORE i say!
<3 big font!
O_O ha! i love this! So interesting! i wonder if kagome will be a miko and who or what will show up now that inuyasha has called his father!
Luna (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Jun 2011
Wow! Very nice! ^^
West (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Jun 2011
Kagome is taking all of this really calmly for someone who just nearly lost a leg, nearly became possessed, and now is bleed from a hole in her side. Maybe it's shock, but I think normal people would be freaking out. Can't wait for the next chapter to see if she does, and wait doesn't the fact that Sesshomaru didn't kill Naraku mean that he can't attack Kagome? Update soon I am on the edge of my seat!!!!
Awesome Awesome! I can't wait to see how this turns out!
OMFG i so cant wait to see the next chapter! I'm totally on the edge of my seat! Kagome's always getting dared to do something! makes me crazy!
OMG!!! Feed me more of this! I love it! I'm not one for mystery but this is like eating icecream or something else that is addictive! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Luna (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 Jun 2011
definitely spooky. cant wait for more! ^^
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