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Reviews for Retribution by MissTeak

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ashley (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Great chapter! I really can't wait for the next update. I hope we finally get some information on the ghost! Update soon!


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Gosh...spooky. This reminds me of Ghost Hunt. Did you watch this anime? If you like horror, I think you will like it. XD There's an episode about the mansion as well. you are doing a great job in this. I can totally feel the horror Kagome must have been in.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

ok srsly... this is creepy as all get out @_@ but you are doing a wonderful job with it and I really can't wait to see what happens next. I hope it doesn't take Sesshomaru to long before he believes her and stops being a jerk. And you are ebil with your ebil hanging on the edge of my seat cliffies!!!!!!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Ah!  You're killing me?  What does she see?  

Wow, you got my adrenaline rushing on that one.  Great build up!  


Sonja1023 (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

This was amazing, please keep updating


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 6) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

So, so EVIL!


Rikayu (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

MT!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I implore you to continue!  Why are your stories so addicting?  And this story is actually super stuck in my head....... this story added to my over-active imagination, and having a fiance who knocks out early... I'm starting to hear things when I'm alone in my living room -___-  I got a cold chill when you mentioned the man outside the window >.>  

Anyways, I've missed your writing and I definitely love this one!  It's really hard to get a good thriller/horror SessKag to read!  And this is just fantastic!


ashley (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

What an awesome and revealing chapter! I love the backstory that you've added. I was wondering if you were going to have moments in the story where sesshoumaru would be working on other cases. I'm not big into police force information myself, but I think some investegators have multipule cases at once, and I think it would be awesome if the was a kagxsess meet-up while he was on another case. But this is just my randomness thinking.


Heather Miller (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

Oh wow they put Sesshoumaru's father in the nut house! This story gets more and more interesting. Can't wait to see how it all comes together. I think it would be interesting for you somehow to bring the past events into the story. Like what took place to bring Kiba to the point were they had to put him in the nut house maybe like a flashback or something. This story can go so many ways and I can't wait to see how you bring it to life! Waiting patiently on the edge of her seat for the next installment!!

                                                                                                            Heather


Zyren (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

This is like reading a scary book under the covers at night. I love it! It really invokes a feeling of fear and eeriness and I am dying to know what happened in that house!!


Zyren (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

This is like reading a scary book under the covers at night. I love it! It really invokes a feeling of fear and eeriness and I am dying to know what happened in that house!!


Tana_san (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

And the plot thickens with a twist. Sesshoumaru has his reasons for being so short, rude and abrupt where Kagome's claim was made. Honestly, if he's so biased, which he is, he shouldn't have being the senior detective sent there. He can't possibly be fair seeing as his own father (I rather like the name, by the way) had such a detrimental reaction to the case in the past that it sent him to an asylum.

As Shippo said, there's no gray, only black and white with Sesshoumaru. There's no option that there just might be something that is unexplainable. I'll bet the man is a total aetheist(sp?) because if you believe in God or in this culture, gods then you must believe in the devil, Satan, or the equivilent thereof. What I am getting at is that you can't see them, but you know they're there and you also know that there is always a war going on to take our human souls to the netherworld, or hell.

I have a feeling Sesshoumaru is up for a very rude awakening when the pieces to this puzzle become to real for him to deny.   JEN


Rachel (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

Omg Sesshomaru's father is in an INSANE ASSYLUM?!?!?!?! Update sooooon!


Luna (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

OMGOMGOMG!!!! An asylum??? Poor sesshy papa.... i wanna know moooorrreee!!!


jgem (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

I love a good spooky mystery and this one definitely has my attention. This last chapter has pulled me in..what is going on at the mansion that it drove a man crazy? It also makes Sesshoumaru's hatred of supernatural things more understandable. I thought he protested too much that there had to be a reason.

Anyway, your writing is wonderful as always. Very descriptive so that the reader is drawn in and the story flows well. I'm so glad to see you back!


(Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

Ooo, so that is how it is hmm? I like it, this inspector position for Sesshou is perfectly suited for him. I can't wait for the next update.


rss (Chapter 5) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

so something else had happened in the higurashi mansion, that inupapa was investigating?

cause kagome's family's death had happened in a plane crash no? so i suppose its not related to her family's death...

so what was it that got his attention, that finally put him in an asylum?


rss (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Jun 2011

believe her!!! someone please!!!  @o@


Rachel (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Jun 2011

OMG UPDATE THIS SUPER SOON PLEASE!!!!1


Freya Ishtar (Chapter 4) - Mon 13 Jun 2011

I'm so sorry I haven't been able to keep up with reading and reviewing this as frequently as I would like rl's just been a little more nutty than usual the past couple of weeks.

I. Love. This.  Especially the swing scene and the face at the window- it usually takes quite a bit to spook me, but you had me imagining over and over again what the raspy whisper in her ear sounded like, painstakingly trying to picture that face at the window. 

Please keep up this amazing story, I can't wait to find out more about the house's past . . . and to see just when the spirits make Sessh realize how wrong he is XD.


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