Reviews for Three's Company by Zyren

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Ichisumisama (Chapter 6) - Sun 25 Sep 2022

This story has to be told! Please update!


Sophtt (Chapter 6) - Sun 26 May 2019

I know it's been years since you last updated but i got really invested in this and only wanted to know i really liked the plot...seems really original. I can't shake the feeling you intended  for kouga to eventually die on them or him and sessh breaking up their mating for sessh to be with kags...so heartbreaking anyway :( hope you will update again someday


Crescentmoon1021 (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Dec 2018

I hope you pick this up again and give us an ending! Love where this story is going!!!


SammyJams (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Nov 2018

I can’t tell you incredibly sad it makes me that you stopped writing this - it’s one of the best stories I’ve read on all the different InuYasha fan fiction sites. Please consider picking it up again!


Crescentmoon1021 (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Apr 2017

Will we ever learn the ending?! Good story line! I hope you can finish it! 


KEdakumi (Chapter 6) - Fri 25 Dec 2015

I wrote to Santa hoping he would send you a plunnie to help you with the next chapter.  I love this story and really can't wait to see what you do with this story.


Denua J (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Jul 2015

I love everything about this fic and how you potrayed the relationship between Sesshomaru and kouga, and how they both reacts to Kagome. I love how the sex are not just a filler for the relationships (like many fics hv) I can't wait to see how the relationships between the three dive deeper. 


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Jul 2015

poke poke


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

I was surprised  at Kagome's viciousness towards Hojo and wondered exactly how bad he was. I mean she was ready to deliver him a near death experience with such an expression. Still loved it. I was just a little taken aback. I was a little sad that there was no smudge but the chapter was so well written and it gave us a new direction with Inuyasha and Kikyo that I was completely ready to follow that path and ignore the missingsmut. Sadly, there was a quick in to the chapter a cliffhanger if you will. Well it was a cliffhanger in my opinion. I couldn't believe it. And that's why I'm very thankful that during this little reread to hopefully prepare myself for a swift update that  could possibly come in the next, hopefully, week or so, that there is another chapter after this. I enjoy the easygoing camaraderie  between Inu and Koga, as well as Koga's protective news over him and his hurt feelings involving Kikyo. I kinda wondered at the story behind all of them but I was much more interested in seeing some progress in this threesome/double couple, single middle relationship 

-KD


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 4) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

The dedication still makes me blush a bit. I'm very honored.I'm just a bit shy over it lol, so  hid my face under my blankets like a child then rushed into the chapter. Can you hear me cheering? Sesshou/Kago action!! Whoo!! He was kinda a d***, but I kinda waved it off as suspicion  of her motives mixed with feudal Era mannerisms. Whoo I reread this one before I started waiting for the next chapter. Koga's involvement definitely  helps us get the feelings it'll be the three of them for a while,but it does feel more like it'll be more on the wide of Koga and Kagome and Sesshomaru won't really try to be involved beyond the more intimate  aspect so I'm dying to see how that will change and we'll see that relationship evolution. 

-KD


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

Wow, just wow. that's what I thought when I first read this chapter. They were just... there aren't even words for it. while everything was absolutely fantastic, my thoughts ran parallel to Kagome's in the next chapter , in wishing that she had been the center but I certainly wasn't disappointed in any way. I chuckled at the hint of jealousy Kagome showed when Koga was showing Sesshomaru more attention than her while firmly attached to her second lips as well as her solution.  However, it wasn't enough and I wanted more here too. It seems that for every chapter you write, I yearn even more fiercely for more.

-KD


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 2) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

This chapter definitely gave me to Kagome 's expected reaction to being caught watching such a steamy performance.I likedhow different Kagome 's job was compared to many other stories I've read and enjoyed. Everything about this story is new and different. I am enjoying every bit of it. I found especially enjoyable to see her rip into the program after they had treated her less than stellar li for being a woman in a corporate office. I also enjoyed how she threw the sparkles back in their faces. The boldness of her request to take Koga out and later make him her meal was very surprising, a good surprise, and enjoyable surprise, but still very very surprising.of course the citrus itself, was steamy, enjoyable, and perfection when our silver haired Adonis entered and she realized exactly whom she was dealing with. I was incredibly ravenous to have the next chapter when I first read this, but thankfully the next chapter did not exactly take forever to come out but it certainly did feel like it a few times. No, you're not slow or or lacking. I was just really really impatient  to have the next chapter.

-KD


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Dec 2014

I have owed you this for quite a while. I do apologize for the lateness. I had a baby, I got a promotion at work that requires 40+ hours of work every week, and I've just been on a tailspin. So, to make up for my lateness, I am going to review each and every chapter and hopefully see another one soon. Here we go:

First off, I love Kagome 's voyeuristic tendency in this first chapter. it's so different from anything else I have read. It's also so well done and so well written. The words flow evenly and smoothly into one another. Everything unfolds before your eyes in your mind without any hiccups or bumps that take you out of the story or the scene. Everything fits together perfectly. It's quite hot as well. I love how the surprise was revealed and presented that it ended up being Koga instead of a woman that was paired with  Sesshomaru. Everything about this chapter- everything from the word choice to the characters actions was well chosen, described, and put together. This made me want to read this story so badly, I checked religiously for another chapter regardless of the fact that I had not received an email about it being updated. Everything about it told me that a masterpiece was about to unfold. I'm so glad you turned it into a story rather than leaving it as a one shot.

 

-KD


Ashley (Chapter 6) - Tue 19 Aug 2014

Please...in the name of all that is holy...add another yummy chapter...please


Treece (Chapter 6) - Mon 16 Jun 2014

Wicked good fun.  Looking forward to more. 


Congrats on the graduation, new place and engagement. 


Thanks for taking time to update.  Good fortune!


Ashley (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 May 2014

Please update....pretty please...


Elizabeth (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 May 2014

Please, please, please keep this story going!  I really want to see the end of the relationship...or possibly the mated duo turning into a mated trio!


Rachael (Chapter 6) - Tue 29 Apr 2014

This fic is so freaking awesome!  I can't wait for more ^.^

 


Brittany (Chapter 6) - Tue 15 Apr 2014

I love this story. Please update soon :) 


Rhonda (Chapter 6) - Sat 12 Apr 2014

Thank You for the update.  This is a great story and was thinking about it the other day, planning on looking it up and Ta-Da...here it is!!

Thanks again for the update and looking forward to more!


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