OH I am a naughty me for not reading this! been away so long bleh, this is just marvalous!!! beautiful and tragic! honestly puts my picture to shame!!!! :D i love it thank you so much for being inspired by something i drew to write this beautiful peice! :D

Wow. Words are just...wow. This is a fantastic peice. The end note gives a bit of happiness, maybe. I really like the ambiguity of it to be honest. 

Aww that was so sad, and the artwork is awesome. Great job and I can't wait for more of the Twelfth Concubine!

I'm a sucker for Angst, even though it makes me cry T.T...I simply LOVED this story!!! It's sad without being overbearing and it feels complete alothough I do want more! I don't "need" it, if you get what I mean, I found this while taking a break from reading the 12th, awesome to btw!