I really hope to see a new chapter very soon. This is getting very interesting. Please continue and keep up the great work.
Okay, Sesshomaru's sadistic but i'm not going to judge till i've seen more of his actions. Too bad Kagome didn't stay awake to see the judgement, she's gonna be in for a surprise later once she wakes up. I liked it though, even if the beginning just made me think of Saw.
Diane (Chapter 5) - Wed 02 Nov 2011
Was glad to finally see an update. Rather rough with several missing words & a few words that look like they shouldn't be there, like I but at 1 point, also a judge has a gavel not an anvil. A gavel is a decorative wooden hammer & an anvil is a metal block (I think 5 pounds is as light as they get but I'm not sure) used by blacksmiths & jewelry makers, possibly others.
My goodness I love your twisted mind. <3
Keep it up, Purr :)
-MissKatt
Ok, I read and finished :3
At first I was horrified, really, the 1st person point view was so scary! I even thought that was Naraku... I mistook Sesshomaru for Naraku, God!
After that...I dont know, Im so anxious...Im scared for Kagome... Sesshomaru IS ruthless! But I am so intrigued...I really want to know how will their relationship work :3
Thanks for writing!
Nicely done. As you warned me, it is very unique, but I like it! You are doing a superb job :)
-MissKatt
:pokes: I really liked this story ;) Hope you continue it soon!
I really really love this story and I hope you continue to write for this story and I can't wait till the next chapter =D
Rechiru (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Aug 2011
This is the best story that I have read so far!!! can you please continue it? I love stories like this! looking forward to the next chapter!!
O_O omfg this is amazing!
oh my! thi s is so interetsing!
CUTE!
fascinating really... i have not read a story such as this and it intrigues me and piques my curiousity as to what will be happening next please update again real soon :) i am enjoying ur unique story so far and i believe it can only get better great work!
Rin (Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Jul 2011
Wow. That was a rather intense chapter. Poor Sesshoumaru, being barred what he wanted by a group of humans.I fear for Miroku when he wakes up. I hope he has a couple safety plans.
Good job putting up a worthy fight on Kagome's part though. You get 'im girl! XP <3
*.* Pls update soon :3
Manatee (Chapter 4) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Thanks for the update! I really enjoy this fic, its very unique!
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