Love this story! Please update soon :) Pretty please with a cherry on the top! XD
Your missing a few words in the sixth paragraph from the bottom if no one's mentioned it. I loved this chapter, Sesshomaru so forceful, but it's hard to picture it when chibi versions keep poping up in my head. I'm with Kagome's first instinct when he started servicing her, but the instinct to run wasn't that bad either, if only it'd been a little stonger before that though.
Ooh! is this where the serisous action begins???
Can't wait for you to update again
Mina-san (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
I love this story its very unique and I love the roles of Sango and Miroku they are perfection defined. Can't wait to read more!
Well written, but Sessh is being a bit of a jerk! Must suck for Kagme!
Update soon!
JA NE!
Damn! He almost had her. I liked the whole stealth team coming out of trees and drugging him while getting her away. That was exciting! Great job!
Oh my! This story is going wonderfully! I love the overall idea and I praise your creativity! And yes, Smortz is great :) Hoping to see what's going to happen now... by the way, I would really like to see some form of fanart of this story. I was reading and from time to time "Oh, so cute!" would come to my mind lol Tiny Sesshomaru, but so dominant!
Misaki (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
Very interesting.
Misaki (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
Very interesting.
Jay_chAn (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
WOW!
This has been a real entertaining story and I hope you update soon!
I love this story, its so different from others. You don't know how excited to see you updated =D. great work
Rin (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 May 2011
Awww. Poor Kagome. there for not that long and already she's been chased and caught. Good Job Sesshoumaru, now you better keep her, and treat her right!
Nice Chapter. <3
OMG, please say your going to describe what happened between them, that last thought was too funny. I Loved this one, please describe what was going through his head as this happened.
More More More!!!!!!!!
mina (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011
AHHH I love this story has such potentail!!!!!
SMO! (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011
T_T Oh how I wish Chapter 4 was finished.... Love this story.
PS: I am super happy to be your 'eta'. :D
~Smo
I love it. I get sooo excited when I see it has been updated because this is such a great story already
Shilo (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Apr 2011
omg, this is an awesome story. love to read the next story soon. Please update soon. i cant wait
Oktobre (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
Please please please keep on writing on this wonderful idea!!! I absolutely love this story!!!!!!
Silence (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Apr 2011
Man this is such a cute idea I can't wait for more chapters :)
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