This story has potential! I love the fact that Kagome is independent. You are truly talented that little moment between Kagome and Maru was so...touching...I could experience every single feeling...

I was under the impression that Kags was in hiding with Maru...but the conversation from Inuyasha and Sesshomaru glosses over the fact that Sesshomaru just found them. I mean if she wasn't in hiding Fluffy would have been more persistant and annoying while Maru was younger.

give Fluffy butt hell Kags!

the story's a bit faster paced then I usually like and I think it could use a lil more flushing out plot wise (how exactly the arguement started, the sitch where Ayame has the guts to lie to Sesshomaru etc, where Kags found a place to hide and Maru's growing up years) but I do like the story and for all I know you'll flush it out with flashbacks

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

has Inu known all these years where Kags was? what was his reaction to his half-brother finding them?

i love this story. keep up the great work.  but i have a question?   why did the wolf girl lie, and what was the goal?

interestin so far.. keep up d good work.. will b wait 2 read d next update..