Reviews for A Debt to Be Paid by Rinku

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Koiyuki (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Jan 2022

I actually quite dislike it when people make being hanyo a literal genetic inferiority. It feels like its validating the inherent prejudices that yokai & ningen have for each other. I prefer the prospect that hanyo have just as much of a right to live there lives as anyone.


daapatemysoul (Chapter 23) - Sun 26 Sep 2021

So I've been rereading this and I was wondering if you plan on ever finishing it? I'm really curious to see where it goes! If I was in Kagomes shoes, I think I'd literally just turn inwards and act like a robot. 


Yamagomori (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Sep 2021

Inuyasha calling Sesshoumaru a "dirty, creepy bastard" is probably the funniest thing I've ever read lol. Now I'm cackling madly but cannot hope to explain the joke without seeming crazy....oh well


KyraTekak (Chapter 23) - Tue 13 Jul 2021

Hope for more updates 


Holly Sykes (Chapter 11) - Mon 18 Jan 2021

Thank you for sharing. The more I read, the more I love! 


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 23) - Tue 07 Apr 2020

Hey, I want you to know that how much I love my favorite trio who portrayed by you....and respect for the your mature values about sexual relationship between the main couple of this fic(Certainly a sex without reciprocal agreement feels like the rape, not the making love). Sincerly. At least as far as I can tell, Kagome is not childish. She merely trying to handle two BIG dog..Sesshoumaru is........lol. He looks like an icy arrogant PRINCE as always. But seems to he trying to treat well his life mate. (He is not mere an asshole after all) And Inuyasha! Feeling SO sorry n sad every time I read his painful moments cause I love him just like Kagome though he often acts stupid ;P Hope you doing well&considering about updating. I REALLY REALLY miss you and your fics.


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 23) - Tue 03 Sep 2019

I reread this this week and I just wanted to let you know it's still a favorite and I hope everything  is going good for you and you come back to fanfiction soon


SammyJams (Chapter 23) - Fri 27 Jul 2018

Wish this wasn’t abandoned


LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 23) - Sat 05 May 2018

Finally starting  to  go somewhere. 


Dryft (Chapter 23) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

This was a pretty good chapter and I enjoyed the end with Rin. Maybe it will help Kagome open her eyes and yes she needs better clothes. I'm surprised she hasn't realised herself she dresses wrongly in this time period yet.


Dryft (Chapter 21) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

I am enjoying that you are keeping it real with Sango and Miroku still being afraid of Inuyasha. It would of been quite unrealistic if they weren't. I'm not sure how Miroku is able to do what he did since he was tortured and killed. Sango is spot on keeping away from him. Your story just keeps on getting better. Kagome needs a reality check badly that she isn't capable of taking care of herself in front of other suitors and Sesshomaru is her best shot. He should let her try to defend herself against a suitor from time to time to really drive the point in for her to realize how lucky she actually is being chosen by Sesshomaru! Kagome seems to ignore the fact many youkai will be chasing her and trying to rape her and that he has been quite nice and doing nice things and saved her friends and doing things for her because she wants them.


Dryft (Chapter 20) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

Really enjoying the fact Kagome and Sesshomaru can attempt at progress despite Kagome refusing to give Sesshomaru any benifit of the doubt like she does for everyone else in her life. Lovely story still! Poor Sesshomaru, he deserves someone better


Dryft (Chapter 18) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

finally some good progress for these two!


Dryft (Chapter 16) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

ugh too much inuyasha kagome romance ......is it really a sessxkag romance at this point? It's more like Inuyasha and Kagome going to the ends of the earth against all odds and try and defy fate to remain lovers even though he killed their friends and almost killed her. Sesshomaru is her consolation prize for not getting Inuyasha and even then.......its looking pretty grim with the constant Kagome throwing herself to Inuyasha and vice versa. Still an epic story but doesn't feel it's meant to be for sees x kag at all


Dryft (Chapter 15) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

Thank you Sango!!! Inuyasha knows how dangerous his youkai form is....he shouldnt downplay his losing control that badly.... ever.... shows how irresponsible and uncaring of concequences around him, he is! your writing is brilliant!!


Dryft (Chapter 13) - Fri 13 Apr 2018

I am loving this progress so much!!!! Still hating Kagome's ridiculous denial. I hope Miroku and Sango aren't as delusional. You are an amazing writer!


Dryft (Chapter 12) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

really Kagome? Sango is dying because of Inuyasha....you were almost killed by him....Sesshomaru was constantly attacked by him and challenged but the only thing you care about is if he's alive? What if he survived and not Sesshomaru? You'd be dead.


Dryft (Chapter 11) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

I really do not understand Kagome obsession with Inuyasha and forgiving him about all those lies and mentally trying to work around trying not to male him a bad guy for doing that. It screams abusive relationship when you are always excusing your others actions...like how Inuyasha treated Kagome while Kikyo was alive and only wanted Kagome once Kikyo was dead and now all these lies.....The girl preaches about women being strong independant but she is the total opposite, needing Inuyasha every second and excusing him for everything :/ I am team Sesshomaru and hope Kagome has to seek out his protection once Kagome gets attacked by Inuyasha


Dryft (Chapter 10) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

I would vote on Inuyasha being with kikyo then succumbing to his demon blood and his own group having to kill him as such is the reality of demon blood in a hanyou. Inuyasha is too selfish and cowardly from having kept so much from the group to take his own life. But I'm sure much has already been written!


Dryft (Chapter 8) - Thu 12 Apr 2018

I really don't understand Kagome....she finds out Inuyasha has been keeping knowledge about her making full blooded youkai from her and the heritage of youkai and yet she still always wipes his slate clean and forgives him for everything wrong he ever does...


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