Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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KEdakumi (Chapter 158) - Fri 27 Jul 2012

Men that blame the woman are such idiots... and the fact there are whole cultures built around the idea that men can't control themselves is just insane. (refuses to look at the amount of people in the US that sue one another over things like getting fat from fast food) :P  I'll get off my soapbox now.  I can't wait for more.  Obviously Kagome's not a completely blah and childlike looking female if he's having this many issues. (still think you should hook up all three of them) :)  Can't wait for more.


KAt (Chapter 158) - Fri 27 Jul 2012

You tell'em sister!!!!!!! Nuns Indeed.


Lyra (Chapter 158) - Fri 27 Jul 2012

Ha!  At least he realizes he's being an idiot!  I can't say I'm surprised by this - Kagome's clothing has always been one of those little peeves that drives me nuts, because there was no need for her to be flashing panty and thigh at every male within eye-distance.  At the same time, Minoru recognizes that his own poor self-control is no reason to take out his...*ahem* issues on the girl he is meant to be helping.  I do wonder, however, if he's considered just asking Kagome to wear more concealing clothes next time she comes from home.  A pair of cargo pants and a T-shirt come to mind...though of course he might have assumed that all girls in the future wear so little all the time :P

 

MOAR!

XD

<3

 


Anil Pheonix (Chapter 157) - Thu 26 Jul 2012

Incredibly amusing. So worth losing sleep over. :) there's a lot going on so I hope you update soon.


Pricila (Chapter 157) - Wed 25 Jul 2012

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!  Awesome!!


Deana (Chapter 157) - Wed 25 Jul 2012

I'm glad you updated. Quite amusing chapter. Can't wait for next update.


anon (Chapter 157) - Wed 25 Jul 2012

I have read thousands and thousands of chapters on Dokuga, and never reviewed.

But OH MY GAAAAAWD, this chapter made me snort milk out of my nose.  Well done.


Chie (Chapter 157) - Wed 25 Jul 2012

I suppose I should be giggling evilly, or cheering for Sesshy's revenge... But all I can do is wince in empathy and pity for Kagome.

A little over a week ago in animecon my costume included a pleated skirt. It wasn't short, pretty much to my knees. But it still rose up quite prettily in the wind. >______>;;


koneji (Chapter 156) - Fri 20 Jul 2012

Minoru's POV was quite appreciated, and very entertaining. That hint of wanting something more from Sesshoumaru made me squeal! (Just...a tiny bit) I do adore Sesshoumaru's little quirks - makes him seem more approachable in the reader's perspective. Another great chapter!


KEdakumi (Chapter 156) - Fri 20 Jul 2012

What the mind's eye has seen... can not be unseen..... *sheesh*

Still think you should bring them all together.  Quick!  Doll up Kagome so Minoru sees her more mature looking. :D

Great chapter, can't wait to see more! (you know, without images of Totosai... XD  I think someone drew some of those mind-bleach worthy pictures and posted them around here somewhere)


Lyra (Chapter 156) - Fri 20 Jul 2012

I wuvs you.  I wuvs you with so much wuv and I think I am going to laugh-and-cry myself to death.  Hairy pitted buggy legs! HAHA.  And Kagome...silly girl.  And Minoru - my god, such a manwhore!  Seriously!  ::ROFL::  There is beauty in his pity for Kagome - in his sharp and dysfunctional observations...but how sad he is, really, after all.  He cuddles Sesshomaru?!  That is his pride and...joy? No meaning in a woman for him...yet.   MMmmmmhmhmhmhm....hahahha.  I await with pleasure what I know is coming XD

Oh, and...

MOAR! :D

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3


Loveyaa (Chapter 155) - Thu 19 Jul 2012

I like the little aside by Kagome. Power does come in many forms. And I look forward to Kagome and Inuyasha coming into their own. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Zero (Chapter 155) - Wed 18 Jul 2012

I love the way you portray the characters.  The peeks inside their heads are so much fun XD.  I look forward to more. 


Pricila (Chapter 155) - Wed 18 Jul 2012

Hahahaha, funny!!


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 155) - Wed 18 Jul 2012

Right. So it's been near forever since I reviewed, but this chapter had me chuckling. I just love the opportunity to get into Kagome's little hormonal mind, and you write her so beautifully and so realistically that she just jumps off of the page.

Oh, and don't get me started on Minoru lol - we all know he'll always be the star of this breaking contest you have going on.

Lovely chapter (and I LOVE the way you described Inuyasha's bright, wild nature as you did - absulutely marvelous) and I can't wait for the next!

~Aubrey


Loveyaa (Chapter 154) - Sun 08 Jul 2012

This just has wverybody questioning everything. Hopefully when they all come out on the other end they are much closer for it. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Pricila (Chapter 154) - Sat 07 Jul 2012

Oh I did enjoy it, thanks for the updates!


Neelixonee (Chapter 153) - Sat 07 Jul 2012

I love this story.  It leaves plenty room for the imagination to run wild and just enough to keep me coming back.  I also LOVE the outtakes!!

 


melissa (Chapter 153) - Sat 07 Jul 2012

i love this story its really funny


Loveyaa (Chapter 151) - Fri 06 Jul 2012

Well..that didn't go quite as planned but I wonder how it will turn out. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


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