Reviews for Pack by NicoRavenPen

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Elizabeth (Chapter 36) - Wed 29 Jan 2014

I love this story and can't believe I put it off for so long. I hope that you will update again soon (mind you, I'm just being hopeful here, no real rush or anything). Mind you, I am curious as to when Naraku will show up. I mean, he can't remain in hiding much longer right? Gyah, the anticipation is going to get to me. Oh well! Gambatte!


Jc (Chapter 36) - Sun 08 Sep 2013

More, more, more, please update! =]


Dominque (Chapter 36) - Wed 14 Aug 2013

Such a wonderful story :)


Amy (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Aug 2013

I saw this updated over on fanfiction.net and decided to come over here to re-read (and review) it. I love your stories. You give lots of emtional depth without over-writing it. Kagome is slowly breaking away from Inuyasha because of her premontions and his actions. This is a nice set-up to allow her to open her heart to another. Kagome is tricky that way. I think her character is very loyal by her nature and for her to end up with someone other than Inuyasha there has to be a good reason. (A dilemma for all good Sesshoumaru and Kagome shippers!) Also I adore nurturing  Kagome and papa Sesshoumaru!

 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 36) - Wed 31 Jul 2013

Love the story, keep it coming. 


Nicole (Chapter 36) - Sun 21 Jul 2013

love the story please finish it :)


smcandy (Chapter 10) - Mon 23 Jul 2012

Just so you know in case you ever wanna correct this in any chapters so far within the story it’s daiyokai not taiyokai.

 

This link might help you remember the difference when putting it in your story:

 

http://www.dokuga.com/forum/6-general-discussion/13847-daiyoukai-vs-taiyoukai

 

http://inuyasha.wikia.com/wiki/Daiy%C5%8Dkai

 

Many writers get the two confused.

 

Also another FYI Sessho’d mokomoko-sama is part of him like a dog’s tail-  During an interview with Rumiko Takahashi (the creator of Inuyasha) she revealed that she drew it to look like a boa, but she drew it too big. After a while, she thought it looked fine, so she left it like that. It is a huge bunch of FLUFF, thought to be a symbol of his rank as a demon lord. It has also been shown bleeding in Rumiko Takahashi profiles charter book it is in fact part of his body . - Quotes from here http://inuyasha.wikia.com/wiki/Sesshomaru#Powers_and_Abilities

 

Other that that looking pretty good I look forward to reading more.

Sincerely,

Authoress smcandy


Yohko (Chapter 36) - Sun 24 Jun 2012

I'm really loving this story. Sesshoumaru as a doting mate is really nice to read about :) Looking forward to your next update...:)


bmo-galaxy (Chapter 24) - Thu 21 Jun 2012

The noise I made at the end of chapter 24 was embarrassing and the utter battle cry of fan girls. They're courting! Ah, I love this story so much!


DescendingFrost (Chapter 36) - Wed 09 May 2012

Again, I love love this story! Keep up the amazing work--I am simply enthralled with your writing. ^^


Loveyaa (Chapter 36) - Fri 02 Mar 2012

Even though it was a filler chapter it was quite enjoyable. You did a nice job pulling it all off. They are just too cute and seem to be handling all this change happening quite quickly very well. Im just waiting for the external conflict since they are just too close and in love for an internal one. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


ArisaChan (Chapter 36) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

Yay! Can't wait to read more! Their relationships is so cute. I can't wait to see everything develope. 


RubyJeweler (Chapter 36) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

With each chapter, I'm falling more and more in love with this story. <3 This chapter was very cute, especially with all the sweet interactions between Kagome and Sesshomaru. Please continue to write more. Thank you.


koneji (Chapter 36) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

It was nice reading about their relaxation time, even with Hojo hovering around. I admit I was screaming in my head: "Restraining order!!" XD And the pup's sudden growth like that was a completely unexpected (but welcome) bit! Keep up the fantastic work!


Alexandra (Chapter 36) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

OMG!! YOU UPDATED!!! XD

I love this fanfic. I can't believe you updated!! Thank you!

I haven't seen this fic in a while. It's so cute how you developed the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. *sigh* It's like they are the perfect couple!

I can't wait to read more!!


KEdakumi (Chapter 36) - Mon 27 Feb 2012

Yeah! Another update!  Love this story!  Can't wait to read about the blood vessel Hojo will pop when he sees a preggy Kagome.  Wonder if he's gonna try something stupid. (that'll most likely end up getting him killed)

Can't wait for more.


Kit (Chapter 33) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Just wanted to say that a well done fade to black or less explicit description is sometimes much appreciated!


Kit (Chapter 14) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

Your Sess characterization is very good! I read a lot of fiction, and I must say that a character can be led up to allowing OOC actions in the context of a story that would never happen in canon, like hair brushing. But. It works perfectly because you keep both character consistent and in line with their canon personalities. Kagome is a little more mature and softer spoken than in the anime, but her personality is filled out and has not been made into a caricature or 2d sterotype, and frankly I think the difference is an improvement. Good job with the plot teasers too!

 

 


kit (Chapter 11) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

this is very good, i love the characterizations!


Danielle (Chapter 25) - Mon 06 Feb 2012

I love this story so far... but I can't help but notice that you are completely forgetting about poor widdle Kirara *is sad*

But anyways, this story is so very very good. You do such a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character. I can't wait to read more :3


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