WOW!  Very dark beginning.  I LUV IT!  I just wish that it was not to be your final story...I have become so addicted to your writing.  I am looking forward to reading the rest of this.

Definitely going to be a dark story.  Sorry to see that you've decided to not write fanfiction.  Enjoy your retirement!

Thanks for all the great stories and this one too,

A magnific story, it hoock me right from the start. I look forward to the next chapter

so sad ur leaving fanfic writing for a bit but i loved ur work!! i hope to see u return someday as for this fic, i absolutely look forward to it! these upcoming 13 days i will be waiting for a new chapter...its getting really good and this is only chapter 1