Okay. This was... amazing. ????????????????????????

This is on of the most frustrating fanfics i've ever read haha ???? i was like "oh come on!" everytime they missed eachother lol. But it was great though

I love this story.  The suspense was almost killing me, but it made their next meeting so worth it. This story makes for a nice one shot. I enjoyed it a lot.

I love it...

That was so cute!! Please write more like this one and Let us fall in love in the future!!!

Take care,

Well done! The story captures the feeling of the original artwork really well... and is completely adorable in its own right :)

Gorgeous and sweet, this fanfic prefectly captures the missed chances portrayed in r0o's art. Thank you for writing this, it is a lovely read :)

I was so exasperated when they continued to pass by each other without really meeting one another! For almost a year!!! Poor guys! :))) But the way they met again was worth it! I was so pleased! Like in the movies, really, really loved it :D I have a huge smile on my face, that happy your ending made me feel :))) Thank you!

I love how everything tied together!!

That was so incredibly frustrating to read! I loved it! I was mentally screaming at the two EVERY time they missed each other! Haha. It was a great, sweet  story though!

sweet ... I just loved how they were always in close proximity but never actually being able to see each other save the first meeting at the festival ... life is like that though ;)

you have a very nice writing style and I enjoied the story so much ... I actually found it because of the fanart you got your inspiration from :)

|~sayuri~|

i love this story.  it was so well done and so many near misses that it kept me hanging on to the end.  even at the end, I was expecting some other stupid thing to come up that would keep them from actually meeting.  LOL

Great Job.

XD

Adorable and heart warming. it gives me hope that love is just around the corner for me. sequal? i cant ever get enough of your one shots.

THAT'S SO KAWAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!

Phew, just woke up, and it's time to read this!

Woot, I love Souta! i mean don't give me wrong, I prefer Sess/Kag, but he's always a nice little addition. And apparently, Kagome is being a good sister to him. She always was, lmao, maybe a bit pushy at time.. but that's Kagome, lol. What's Takoyaki? *blushes in shame* *runs to research* OHHH! I know that. Silly goose. I want some now though... MEAN YOU! I had to laugh at Kagome's cooking though, because I kept thinking about Inuyasha semi-insulting her food in the show all the time, lmao!

YOU KNOW WHAT! As soon as she said she was leaving, I was like, that's it, Sesshomaru's about to come in. Yeah, I just know you're evilness. But it's okay. I'm so pumped up for this story, I'm jumping like up and down right now, lol. OHMYGOD! I was wrong. Darn. Wow, I don't know what to say, lmao! WELL THIS IS THE MEETING OF A LIFETIME! OHMYGOD, SESSHOMARU JUMP AND GET HER! JUST TIE HER UP AND NEVER LET HER GO!

Alright, I feel better now.

Awe look at poor Sesshy who's afraid he's looking like a loser, he's such a sweetheart, it's insane, lol! Awe, we all know he's only getting more boxes so he can be looking at Kagome for longer, lol. He's not fooling me! WOW! WAS THAT AN ATTEMPT AT FLIRTING? GOOD BOY! Bold. I like it, bold and shy. Lmao! I want to be flirt with food too! ALRIGHT I KNOW! I need to stop talking about food. Shessshh, you're such a meanie. No not you. The voice in my head.

Back to sanity.

Four boxes of Takoyaki... I hope he is hungry, lmao!

I like your little titles there for you know scenes, and moment and what not. It's giving a little different feel to the whole thing, but I like it! Well, well, it seems that Sesshomaru was worried over nothing since he did catch the eye of Kagome! I don't think she'll be finding him in Souta's book though, but it's a cute try, lmao!

LMAO! See, I told you it was too much Takoyaki for one person! And the cute thing, I bet he has to eat it all by himself because he doesnt want anyone else to have some, and he doesn't want to throw it out. OHMYGOD, haha, he had the same idea as her, see they are made for each other. Well that's because you write them so perfectly to be together!

I like you, for now, lol.

22! See, too old for high school, lmao! Wow, lol. Girl believes in love at first sight, well I can't blame her because i think the same way, lol! It's so cute she spends her wish on him awee! And because you love ... well "love" as well, her wish will come true.. .right? IT BETTER. Though, I'm just WAITING, dreading all the moments they will miss each other, lol! *cringes*

Awe, and poor thing, all she wanted was for him to be there for her birthday to make it complete! She's already so deep in love!

OH SESSHOMARU WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! DUMMY! SEE IF YOU HAD ASKED FOR HER NAME THAT TIME, YOU WOULDN'T BE IN THIS MESS. I think he needs to learn to be more forward, or this will never work, lmao! Darn. Party pooper. He ruined my party, lmao!

See, this is why you need to pay more attention, everywhere you go, even if the scenery of cherry blossoms is beautiful. URGH!  IMEAN GOOD KAGOME! Kagome girl, you've got the worst timing in the world! I MEAN THE MAN OF YOUR LIFE WAS RIGHT THERE? What was that? It's not your fault? Well, you're right, It's Jasmine's fault. Let's get her.

YOU KNOW I'M KIDDING! I love you, you know that!

...Are you trying to tell me that if stupid Kagome hadn't forgotten her change, she would have ran into Sesshomaru? You do know I now have to kill Kagome right? I mean there is no other way around this. She has to die. STUPID DISTRACTED GIRL! Urgh. Lmao, they haven't even missed each other that many times yet, and I'm already all worked up!

OH. Sesshomaru is to blame too, I know... But I like him so much since he's sexy, that I can't hate him as much, lmao!

Awe, Kagome and Rin meeting, I guess that is one more step in the right direction for Kagome, and Sesshomaru! Lol. At least, I'll hope so. You know what, Rin and Souta together, that could be so cute! It's like.. intergeneration.. no wait, what's the word I'm looking for? Oh well, you get it, lmao. I'm slow in the morning, okay? Lol....Noon is not morning you say? I beg to differ. Lmao.

Isn't that cute, Kagome taught Souta, and Sesshomaru taught Rin. See they are meant to be with each other. So cute, oh poor silly souls. Even if you try to organize a meeting, something will happen, and they won't meet! Just give it up already! Lol! I'm such a pessimist, aren't I? I wish Sesshomaru would know who's the one gifting him that, huh. Lol.

RUN KAGOME! It's even better to read that scene with the full story, lol! See this is why you need one door, then they would have met each other no matter what, lol .I guess fate (in this case YOU) just hates them, or you like to torture us. I vote for the second option.

Ohmygod, where is he going, is the shrine? Please tell me he's going to the shrine. AND PLUS for the love of everything that's holy TELL ME KAGOME IS GOING TO BE THERE AT SOME POINT! I'm just about to reach my limit, and I need some Kagome/ Sesshomaru time, like RIGHT NOW!

Awe he's so cute, I love it when Sesshomaru is all caring for Rin, it makes my heart melt. And you know what, I always love stories when she's his little sister. Don't give me wrong, I love when he has her for a daughter, but him being her big brother just seems to make it extra special you know? So thanks for that!

Darn it, why did I know Kagome wasn't going to be there? But I hope so hard! And stupid Sesshomaru! LOOK MORE CAREFULLY NEXT TIME! Urgh. Go to your stupid hotel. You dummy.

Lmao, how many times was I told what Sango told Kagome. Poor Kagome it's not her fault though, she simply cannot find the love of her life again, so she has to eat to compensate for the pain she is feeling in her heart, lol! Oh I think Kagome just gave Miroku the perfect excuse to be a pervert. And I agree, Kagome isn't trying to find anyone, because she's got someoen already, he just doesn't know he belongs to her, though he would love such thing.

NO KAGOME he has no girlfriend, so all you have to do, is look around a little bit more, and he'll be all yours girl! I really think Sango is worried about Kagome's weight, lmao. She will do about anything to bring her away from food. I think that might mean Kagome has been eating way too much lately, lmao!

See, now I hate Sango. If she hadn't taken Kagome away, Sesshomaru and Kagome would have met! She just destroyed the love life she had been trying to save. GOOD JOB SANGO, I HOPE YOU'RE PROUD OF YOURSELF. Yes, I am aware that she cannot hear my shouting, I still have to let it out though.

Awe, poor Sesshy, he's still love sick too!

WAIT WHAT! WHAT HAPPENED! Was that Sesshomaru giving her back her money? Wait, it couldn't be or she would have known! I'm rushing to the next scene, but it has absolutely nothing to do with the  500 yen! WHAT HUH! Alright, I'll shut up and keep reading, shessh. Alright, maybe the next scene has something to do with it, LMAO! I was just too excited. Awe, Sesshy see what happens when you are too busy with work? YOU MISS KAGOME! URGH!

Oh Kagome you silly girl, do you realize you now have the email of the man of your life? And you comment on how much of a work-a-holic he is! Oh Sesshomaru you silly guy. Lol! You are going to like working with her even more once you're going to find out who she is. Though working will be the last thing on your mind!

REALLY THE FLU? Lmao. URGH. I can't even speak anymore.

Awe, Kagome sweet girl, still hoping her birthday wish will come true. I wish I could tell her during her giggling fit, that Sesshomaru made himself sick eating all that, lmao!

It's titled finally, does that mean, I can finally see Kagome and Sesshomaru meet? Because if this goes on any longer, Dokuga is not gonna let me post this review, because it's going to be as long as your fic, LMAO! I seriously think this will take a good chunk of the review page. I'm sorry, maybe reviewing when I'm in such a talking mood is a bad thing, lmao!

Ohmygod you did it! You made Rin and Souta get together, that is so sweet. Knowing how they both are, I just see them blushing at everything, and just like, going so slow, and so sweet. Awe, young love, isnt that like the best thing in the world? Woot for you. I'm glad though that Kagome is finally starting to put some pieces togehter, maybe that will finally lead us somewhere huh?

Ohmygod, my heart is beating so fast. Could it be that busy little bee Sesshomaru is about to meet up with Kagome? NO WAY IN HELL! OHMYGOD! Alright, calm down Maddie, just keep reading. Lmao, I'm sorry I have to laugh at this. He's taking time off his precious schedule to  come have tea, so he calls Kagome, who he is about to go see, because he'll be delayed, and he wants to work out a few things with her! LMAO THIS IS PRICELESS!

YUSH KAGOME RECOGNIZE THE VOICE DO IT GIRL!

LMAO! THEY WERE STILL ON THE PHONE HANGING UP WITH EACH OTHER WHEN SHE OPENED THE DOOR.

OHMYGOD! AFTER ALL THIS I CAN"T BELIVE THEY ARE FINALLY FACE TO FACE! And Kagome saying goodbye into the phone, she is the cutest thing ever. Lmao, they are so awkward around each other now, it's so cute! And he keeps calling her to Takoyaki girl instead of Kagome, lmao! OOHHH WOOOOT!

OH WOW BOLD SESSHOMARU! Not only a game of chess, but dinner instead of a phone call! FINALLY THEY ARE BURNING SOME STEPS AFTER BEING PUSHED BACK SO MANY TIMES! Don't blush Kagome, run into his arms and take him, before Jasmine takes him away again! LMAO!

Oh hun, I don't even know what to say Anymore! This oneshot was more than perfect, and I think you can read what kind of emotional rollercoaster you sent me through lmao! This was a perfect piece of writing, and seriously thank you for gifting all of us with it. I could devour it a million times!

You're the best

Positively DELICIOUS!!!  And to think, if not for my dear Skye-bunny, I would have missed this priceless gem... you can thank her twice, for my review and hers, LOL!  Seriously, what an incredibly imaginative, beautifully written one-shot.  Thank you so much for again sharing your creative genius with us!!!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

Aww, this was really really sweet. I just stayed up way past my bedtime to read this and I'm glad I did. So worth it. Well done!

Miss Teak, I love it!

 :sigh: such a lovely romantic story, though I was nearly pulling my hair out with frustration each time they missed each other.

This goes on my favs list!

Hugs!

What a delightful little story.

Thank you for sharing it.

Haha, too cute.

SQUEAL!! SQUEAL!! SQUEAL!!

Super duper sweet~~~ You made my day with such well-written fluff! Ohmigod.. I'm really speechless. All I can think of is how great this one-shot is! Again, SQUEAL! lol~

Thank you so much for making my day, Minnieme! <3 <3 <3