I've read some other reviews and I must say I disagree with comments that Kagome is acting childish and similar.

But again, I was never a fan of ''Kagome turns into some weird crossover between Wonder woman and a ninja when she comes back into feudal era and her majestic powers woo everyone.''

I figure she'd be busy catching up with school and family. And even in anime, Kags usually opens her mouth without thinking, so her behaviour is not that far from her original character.

But thats just my opinion.

I like the plot, its well written and seems well thought through, something thats become rare in fanfics.

I know its a long shot, but hope you update :)

I like the story, although I personally would have wanted Kagome to be a bit more prepared for living in the past by continuing with her archery skills and trying to learn to control her miko abilities. Perhaps she will somehow "impress" the demons around her by her immense aura, even if it is an untrained aura. Oh well, I want to know more about the kami in this story. Are they holy people that have decided to go against demons, etc. Please update soon!!!

A very good plot! I would like to know more about the vultures and why they thought that Kagome was automatically with Sess. Did they somehow get his mixed up with Inuyasha? Please update.

Kagome had better stop and do some serious thinking and attitude adjustment.  She's not with Inuyasha and her former friends where they adjusted to her modern clothes, attitude, and a tendency to be rather mouthy at times.  Sesshoumaru and his people won't tolerate that from her.  She needs to tone down her attitude and watch her mouth.  That doesn't mean to be completely submissive, just be herself a little more diplomatically.  Right now, she's even irritating me the reader.  Maybe when Shippo returns, he can open her eyes and make her understand her situation better.  She also needs to understand that those vulture creatures want her for some reason and needs to welcome being trained to better protect herself.

engaging story so far.  I love the little quotes in the beginning of each chapter too. there are a few small spelling (e.g. dyed vs died) and punctuation ( 's instead of just "s" where you want to indicate a plural) errors, but on the whole it reads fine.

just a heads-up, I noticed at one point in this chapter you mention her fall was broken by a patch of grass, but then you say the "wildlife" saved her.  Assuming her fall wasn't broken by small rodents residing in the grass, that usage of wildlife seems odd - although technically grass could be something both wild and living, usually the term "wildlife" refers to fauna, not flora.

OMG!!!! :D This story is freaking awesome so far, the plot is AMAZING, and it is so well written, i love all the detail and how long the chapters are, you have an amazing piece of work here, please keep up the great work and update soon! :D

Excellent, and very exciting!  I love it.  I hope you can write more soon, I'm officially addicted.

Nice writing, interesting story!  The earlier part of the chapter, as seen by Kagome, came across as very emotive and "Kagome-like".  I was really getting into her adventure!  Then, when you switched to Sesshomaru's part of the chapter, I felt the same way.  That part of the chapter was very business-like, and just felt to me to be very representative of Sesshomaru, if he were going about the business of running his lands.  I like when an author succeeds in doing this, without making a big deal of shifting points-of-view, which I find distracting.  I am fascinated, and can't wait to find out what happens next.  Thanks for the long and well-written first chapter!

I hope she's trained to fight and defend herself better than before otherwise she'll be stuck on her own with no one to go crying to for help.  In the anime, Inuyasha and the others were always being distracted from battle coming to her rescue and even got injured for it at times.  I always thought that to be selfish and lazy of her to not ever spend any time training her powers and to defend herself.  I can't see Sesshoumaru wasting his time to constantly come to her aid which I don't think he should.  She's going to be in for a big shock to find that a century has passed and things are very different.  Also, her modern day clothes are going to making her stand out even more without her former friends to shield her from dirty looks and whispers.

Still, I'm excited about their first meeting after such a long time, for him at least.  She must be meant to help him in his battle with the Kami.  Hopefully, he will see it that way, especially when he realizes he's missing a tassle.  If so, she had better be trained or get trained!

0o0o0o0o0o0o interesting!