I don't usually read this type of story, but I thought I would give it a try. So far it is different but interesting. You have my curiousity so far. Thanks.
Hi, I have been enjoying your story so far! :) I actually decided to look into your other stories because there's another one of your's I've been reading! Your English is very good! :) I didn't notice anything with your other story, but this one I noticed a few minor things here and there, such as using the wrong tense or having words slightly out of order, but it is clear what you're saying. I don't mean any offense, but I just wanted to let you know that I saw a few small grammatical errors! But it's not a big deal! :) I love your story either way! :) I can't say that I can write stories in other languages, so I think very highly of you! :) Well, I can't write stories lol xD darn... hehe ^^;; anyway, you have an amazing talent! Thanks so much for writing and I hope the pregnancy goes well! Take your time, take care of yourself, and relax! I'm sure everyone is understanding! :) 
      
Mangageek (Chapter 19) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| Congrats on your pregnancy , I loved this chapter and can't wait for more hopefully for me I'll decide to make an account by then lol.
       
Mangageek (Chapter 18) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| Oooo the court case things bouut to get good
       
Mangageek (Chapter 16) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| Awww, I love there tender moment ?(^o^)?
       
Mangageek (Chapter 12) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| TT-TT so many emotions
       
Mangageek (Chapter 7) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| Love this chapter
       
Mangageek (Chapter 3) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| This chapter pulls on your heartstrings a bit.
       
Mangageek (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2012 
| That was so sad but so sweet and defenitly well written.
       
I vote for the stupid little flunkies of the one girl to get a slightly lessened sentence. I suspect they might have been at least partially bullied into their parts in the plot. 
Is there a difference in sentence within this court for pleading Guilty or Not Guilty? 
Kouga & Ayame's littlest is SO cute! ^_^ 
Thanks so much for writing! 
      
AW!!! this was getting so good!!! 
      
Can't wait for the next one!!! 
      
please update soon this story has captured my heart 
      
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