Reviews for A Craigslist Romance by Tal

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KEdakumi (Chapter 25) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

I love this chapter!  

 “Wow, Pops, you’re an idiot.” has to be about the best thing I have ever read 'Yasha saying.

Can't wait for more!


Dark Angel (Chapter 25) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

that was....AWESOME!!! LOL nice work..love the way you had kagome put inu-papa in his place...just...perfect! keep up the good work. its so entertaining.


Rowdys girl (Chapter 25) - Fri 15 Oct 2010

OMGosh!!!!! Dying here! TAl, why didn't you write a Kagome character who says what's really on her mind????

"if not for the tingling of ki radiating from the miko’s other hand… which was hovering over something very dear to him" Oh, yeah, Kagome has to get over her shyness!

This is a WONDERFUL chapter!


Paralelsky (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

Hahahaha..."snort", Level 3 force is awesome! I want to read more! :)


Jo (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

The mere concept of Rin being able to fling full grown youkai across a room had me punching the air with a fist. I kid you not.

I love the way Kagome was able to instantly install a sense of confidence into Rin with just two sentences.

Bravo!


Saholia (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

LOL, this is so funnt! It's such a delight to read your fic-keep it up! :D


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

*snickers* hmm...so...is level3 for males only? and if so how did Kaggy explain that w/o getting into the birds and the bees?

 

totally love your story!

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

 

totally love how Kagome was commanding her like a soldier...or student I guess...wait...how long has it been since she started teaching Rin?


KEdakumi (Chapter 24) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

This story is getting so good.  I can't wait to see how this plays out with Grandpa.  HEHEHE (<--note evil giggle)  Level 3 force... If we all had such abilities, life would be interesting.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha >:3 AWESOME!


katlady (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

LEEL  3  I  WANNAN SEEE  LEVEL  3

 

 

HAHHAHAH

 

 

:hands  over  Briber  cookies  as prommised::

 

 

 

I love  you Tal I hope you know that

 


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Love  it!  Let the party begin!  I love this Kagome, don't take no guff from anyone...I hope the old dog survives her visit!  Can't wait to read more!  Thanks for the chapters!!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

I did NOT stalk you in CHAT!!! Hmmmmph! Nor have I nagged you... much. However, much as I enjoyed this chapter, and I did enjoy this chapter, I am looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation! I love Kagome giving Rin permission to toss aggressors across the room with her power.

One little thing:  Inuyasha bit back a yelp as [he] her tendril of ki poked him

 


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

BUWAHAHAHAHAHA. you should totally have her use Lv3 force. >:)


BlueHeavensAngel (Chapter 24) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Lol.  Awesome once again Tal.  It gets better each chapter.  I would never threaten you though, only bribe with my awesome brownies.  XD Great work!!


SesshysRose (Chapter 19) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

that was cute...kids do that all the time! I love the innocence of Rin in this chapter!


SesshysRose (Chapter 16) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

hmmm...i'd have to say there are a few people I would like to do that to lol...love how Kagome took it into her own hands! Great work, Tal!


Firehauke (Chapter 23) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

This made me smile - not much has lately.  Go you!


Paralelsky (Chapter 23) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Of course I've enjoyed it reading. As for Kagome and Rin's visit to Inu Papa's manor, that's going to be so much fun! I can't wait. 


Jo (Chapter 23) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Love the subject matter.

*Snickers* C'mon you flea bags! Try it! I dare you! I double dare you!

 

But on a different note, I was curious about your switching back and forth between perspectives. Was it on purpose? I can see why, since there were a few things the reader would be missing out on. It was nice to know what Rin was thinking at the same time as what Sesshoumaru was feeling and thinking.

Yay for inner monologues.

 

C'mon you youkai fluff balls! Try to insult the only chosen daughter of Sesshoumaru - the eldest son of the great and terrible Taisho. If they even get past the two brothers, there's of course the governess. And oh Kags packs a punch!

I'm hoping that someone does try it - and then Kags can use them as object lessons. For educational purposes of course. ^^


KitKat (Chapter 23) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Stillll reallllll great :D :D :D :D

:3

Keep it up!


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