This seems like a lot of fun! As others have stated, Sesshoumaru seems pretty close, but in my own opinion, Kagome seems a little off. Otherwise, good job! Hope to read more...

hi I really love how you got sesshou character and really can't wait for an update

I love the story and as Lady Nefertiti said it does show Sesshomaru as Kind yet cold, and caring yet who gives a crap. You have Sesshomaru's attitude down to a t. Hope to see more chapters soon

hi- I absolutely love this chapter. It shows Sesshomaru's 'cold' side yet he's being nice in a 'i'm going to rape you and you're going to love it and its not exactly hurting you' kind of way. I don't know if that makes sense but err...anyway, update soon!