Hi there!
It´s really a cool Story and can´t await the next chapter.
Kagome doesn´t have it easy, but she is doing a great job. This last chapter was really really good.
I can understand Kagome for not wanting Takeshi to fight against his tribe and I can understand Takeshi wo wants to fight against his tribe. It will be intersting, how the fight will take place in the next chapters.
And I really want to know, if this will be a threesome story or not. I mean Takeshi/Kagome/Sesshomaru oder Kagome/Sesshomaru. It´s possible.
If this will be a Kagome/Sesshomaru Story, I would like to read another story with the three as a pair. Of course, only if you do write it someday. It will be really mournful if Takeshi will die.
So I´m waiting with the other readers for the next chapters.
LG Silence-Midnight
ps.: Sorry for the english, but I´m from Germany
I hope you continue with this. It's an excellent story, well written. Great plot-line.
Holy crap... I just bawled my eyes out. Ten years of reading fanfiction...and not once have I cried so hard. Of course, I was never pregnant when I was reading fanfiction before.... but just take the compliment and be happy. :P This chapter was superbly written. Holy crap. I'm still sniffling. Great job, this story is definitely a favorite of mine so far.
Kat (Chapter 20) - Wed 29 Jan 2014
very interesting story... I'm curious where you are going to take it. update soon
uh oh....is takeshi going to die? death flagggg
Kagome is badass ^_^
OMG how did i missed this jewel
THIS IS AWESOME >_<""
and it has so much potential!
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WHY DOES TAKESHI HAVE TO BE SO AWESOME QQ It's not often that I find someones OC completely perfect, that makes me want to ship kagome with someone else aside from sesshoumaru :C....I love this fanfic I love the way you write and portray everyone Let me just say Akihiro (a+), Takeshi(a++) Sesshoumaru (Tied with Takeshi) and Kagome (A++) it's just so perfect, it's not so often that someones Fanfic is this perfect and well written and I will most definitely be waiting for another update. Dont stop writing please!!
I............i love you for this.
GladApple (Chapter 20) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
*clap clap clap* Fantastic chapter!!!!!
I'm finally leaving a review on this site for this story, I read it years ago on fanfiction and I read it on this site too, it's an amazing story. Where have you been? It's been a year and months since I heard from you, I'm glad your back, cool chapter. Keep it coming, Happy New Year!
Like, serious respect for you. Such an awesome fanfic, update soon!
Sheila (Chapter 20) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
Thanks for the update, also for nice long chapters. This is such a good story and I'm loving where this is going...good job. Update soon?
Thanks again :)
gyahh! This is such a good story and I am SO happy that you updated again. i am really curious as to which Lady is allying with Naraku and I am really excited about the obsidian-western battle; hopefully Takeshi will be fine, I really don't want him to be a red shirt. I like him and what's going on between him and Kagome. Wah! the developments in this chapter were just too good. Good luck with your semester! I double majored too and I know the stress - I'm glad it's over too ;). I look forward to your next update, but don't puch yourself too hard. Gambatte!
I don't care that its taken a year! This chapter was certainly worth the wait!! I love Takeshi and I love how he and Kagome are growing closer with every chapter. Please, Please tell me he comes back to her after the hunt for his father. I really want to see them together! I swear this is the first time I've truly fallen inlove with an original character so much that I want to see Kagome with him. I think he would be the perfect first true adult love of her life. Unfortunately Sesshoumaru isn't ready for her yet and vice versa. I'm always left on the edge of my seat savoring every word!! Good luck with school! Congraulations with all the awards you earned them and moving in with your boyfriend!!
Caera (Chapter 20) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
Welcome back!
mari (Chapter 20) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
i really really love this story and the long chapters.thank you so much for the update..
Zeelian (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Jan 2014
Was going to re-read from the start but chapter 1 and 2 has vanished and seems to have been replaced by the final 2 chapters...
Misao (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Dec 2013
pleaseeeeeee continue soon, your fic is awsome ( english is not mi first language) pleaseeeeeeee come back!!!
zai (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 Dec 2013
hi,
i've read this story.
it seems that chapter 1 n 2 are overwrote/revised with the latest chapter (chapter 20).
...i think.
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