This is the second fic where Sessh is put in a predicament that hurts him that I've read today. I must be a masochist, because I love both of the fics already. :3 Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the update!

This is simply fantastic... I love Blood Stained so when I saw that you had another chapter story, I had to check it out. I am really enjoying it a LOT.. I hope you have the time to update soon, if not, no worries because I will still wait to read what ever you dish out.

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Alpine

I have no idea how the eglantine rose looked like, and I went to Google it. It's such a pretty flower, and I can see why it holds the meaning of having a wound to heal. How poignant, really! Especially now that we all know poor Kagome is stuck in hospital. Arrrrgh.

Sesshoumaru's thought process at the traffic lights made me feel totally sad and happy at the same time; he seemed to be so worried, and at the same time, I couldn't help but enjoy how worried for her he was. It's really dreadful when one is caught in a state of uncertainty, especially when anything might happen! It's a life and death situation for goodness' sake.

OMG. ER. ER. ER.

:( SADFACE x 10000000000.

Poor, poor Kagome...she already has a wounded soul, and now, she is wounded physically as well? I hate the idea of her being subjected to further hurt, but then again, there's always Sesshoumaru. I like how you portray him as her rock, holding her in place through the storms. Hopefully she'll turn out okay and see just how precious he is and how he has always loved her for being her.

Awww, Sango! It's nice to know that Kagome has more people there for her instead of only having Sesshoumaru, which would have been pretty lonely and sad. Sango is highly protective of Kagome and very concerned for her well-being, and I have a feeling she knows a lot more about the history of Kagome's love life, especially to do with the 'major heartache', which I have a fairly good idea who it was brought about by. Hrrrrrmph.

The part about Sesshoumaru losing all his control and his composure when it came to Kagome brought tears to my eyes! It's so emotional to hear a man being so emotionally attached to a woman, especially when he is usually a very stern and stoic individual. It's not as if he didn't have a heart; it's just that only a privileged few have access to it. And she is one of them. talk about pain!! My heart is aching :( 

Ahhhhh. I think I heard my heart break. The way you've described poor Kagome lying motionless in the bed, with all those darned machines beeping away, sustaining her fragile life...oh gosh, I have the mental image of a broken doll, which is really, really upsetting. Poor girl. Why is your description of Sesshy's emotions soooooooo detailed, m'dear?? The way he brushed her bangs out of her face is...ahhh. I cannot find a word to describe it.

EEEW. YUCK. GROSS. CRAP.

THE MONSTER IS HERE!!!

ARRRRGH.

I usually like him pretty much, and do my best to give him a wonderful ending, but Inuyasha here is INFURIATING. HELLO???? OMG. Can he not annoy me so much?? *grabs frying pans* I am almost ready to dive in there and skin him alive and fry him. Thank goodness Miyu notices that Sesshoumaru is part of Kagome's life too. It'd have been agony for me to read if she is those 'OMG I must totally help Inuyasha get together with Kagome' people. Like, gross totally. So thank goodness.

OMG.

Stop restraining me. I have to slap Inuyasha.

I am so sorry for not reviewing more on the tirade, but it's bloody annoying to hear that guy go on and on about how Kagome is his business and so on. ESPECIALLY when Kikyo is gone. What does he take the women for??? :X

Now, thankfully you made her wake up!! Now I can be a happy reader again, and will anticipate MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE XD my chunks of sneak peeks are over!! WOOHOOO!! YAY!!!!

oh crap...please don't tell me she gets amnesia!

that'd be like totally heartbreaking!

btw, totally think Sesshomaru should beat Inuyasha up...their dad might wanna get in on the action too if he knows Kagome!

anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

and are they youkai, hanyou, and miko in this or are they all human?

very dramatic and it's definitely engaging! please update soon!

AAARGH SCREW BLOOD STAINED! SCREW IT I SAY!

WRAP IT UP IN ONE CHAPTER AND THEN FOCUS ON PINK CARNATION!

It'll be easy, just type something like "And then the beautiful baby boy was delivered, looking just like his fathers but with his mothers nose and shaped eyes etc, the kidnappers all die from the cold or whatever,and Kouga marries Ayame, and Sess and Kagome live together happily ever after, eventually overcoming their past to get married and have more children the end."

THERE, BLOOD STAINED DONE. NOW UPDATE THIS!

Poor Kagome AND Poor Sesshomaru!  This is positively heartbreaking.  And you have done so well in your portrayal of InuYasha.  His behavior is so typical of guys like this.  I believe we all know this type of man~ I've known several of them in my lifetime, unfortunately.  So self concerned and self absorbed that they become what seems to others, who know the details of their dealings with others, can only think that they are delusional.  After betraying, breaking the hearts and taking advantage of those who thought they were close to them, they feel justified in coming back and trying to do it all again as if their victims will not even remember what they had done.  Often, I think, behavior like this is part of drug abuse or alcoholism, other times a narcissistic personality disorder.  As always, you are THE master of human behavior. 

wow, good story...i am very interested...good job so far...it is well done...i can't wait to see more...

YES! I FINALLY have the time to sit down and go about my usual online activities - Dokuga-ing. LOL.

NEW STORY, NEW STORY!! <3 <3 <3

This chapter was a really sweet one - I read it prior to it being posted, and I loved it then, and now, with it being beta-ed by Daniella, it's even better!!

The nice little bits of information at the start of the story was great; it told us what the flowers meant and that definitely gave us a little bit of insight into what was going to come next in the story.

Kagome, the lovely average girl, is sooooo lucky to have such an awesome guy for a best friend! Sesshoumaru is wonderful; doing so much for her and being there for her at all times. The tiny birthday surprise with the roses was real sweet, too. Sesshoumaru's characterization is very different from how he is in Blood Stained and even Polarity, but I feel you've nonetheless managed to retain the basic qualities that makes Sesshoumaru, well, Sesshoumaru. He is fiercely protective of what he holds dear to his heart, and will stop at nothing to protect it (Kagome, in this case).

Ahhhhh~~~ "Wifey~" that melted me!! I was like, cooing away like some pigeon. LOL. It was cute when I first read it and it still is!

And ooooh, Inuyasha. I like that guy pretty much most of the time, but he is obviously being a nasty creature here again. So it was Inuyasha who had hurt Kagome so badly in the past, and I guess I can only wait and anticipate what's coming next!

As I've mentioned before, the idea of Kagome as a painter is a really cool one! ;) Nice use of colors in portraying emotions, Maddie!

I'll be honest here and say that, well, you already know I know what would happen next, BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN IT IS LESS SAD IN ANY WAY. *SOBS* I cannot wait for more, because I'm pretty sure you've made some changes to your original text, so I'm really looking forward!! Well done, maddie!

HURRY AND UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!

I love it so far! I hope Kagome is alright.

Wow!  This first chapter has it all!  Betrayal, secret emotions, scarred hearts, and drama and suspense!  I'm really looking forward to following this story.

And it is very well-written.  The writing really flows smoothly, grammar and spelling are great.