Oh boy! That was weird, but intense. And while I knew Sess was doing the stalking I had to read it until the end. Tragic really. But good! Good work sister!

wow...didn't expect this at all! very well written...never saw sesshy as the stalker type...but you made me believe lol :)

O.O That was sooo not what I was expecting. I think you captured a pyscho stalker very well though. I can't believe the ending too! *cries and goes to locate chocolate comforts* Good luck luffs! <3

The first one was so cute and then...darkness. So dark and twisted....but very well written. It's an interesting take on the prompts.

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wow, that  was the best fanfiction i have read in a while. sesshomaru as a stocker. Wow! i love that idea and even though he kills kagome in the end its kind of sad, he should have told her from the very beggining, and here i am thinking its going to be a cute romatic story but man was i wrong. kind of sad though that she had to die, sadder still that he did to. keep up the unique work

You know i thought you did a lovely job my dear!! Much better now that it's a full story/ checklist of stalking awesomeness and doom. Hahaha.

Punctuation was still lacking in places though i felt, made some sentences confusing...you should tell your beta that. *nods*

Whatever contest or challenge this is up for i wish you great luck! As well as my vote should that matter 0-o *shrug* > 3 <

*strangle cuddles*

Soooo cute Lisa! *vote*

Aww... this is soo cute. Can i have a little Sesshomaru to keep around? 

On a technical term, there were some grammar, spelling and confusion issues that i noticed. Other than that it was fine, ME likey